An unexpected gift, Chapter 1

(Author's note: It's the first chapter to an attempt...

Broken Glass

The first thing Pamela noticed when she opened her...

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About Myself: writing is simply my escape. i write mostly about what i know. that's not to say that everything i write about has happened to me, it may have just been thoughts or dreams. i don't write a poem a day, or a poem a week...sometimes i won't write for a couple months, it depends on if, when, and where i find inspiration. i don't sugar coat things and ignorance isn't bliss...so if you're looking for those happy go lucky poems i suggest going elsewhere. i appreciate ANY comments, but if you don't like piece i'd like for you to explain why. not saying that i'll change the poem, because i won't, but i'll try to think about it next time i write. well, that was probably boring so i'll end with a quote:
"And when the day arrives I'll become the sky and I'll become the sea and the sea will come to kiss me, for I am going home. Nothing can stop me now.”-trent reznor



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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 26, 2008DriftingPoetry 167
Sep 21, 20088 stories upPoetry 138
Aug 19, 2008downward spiralPoetry 162
Jul 30, 2008Thoughts of a SoldierPoetry 282
Jun 18, 2008Dear DadPoetry 233
May 27, 2008my final truthPoetry 208
May 11, 2008Fatal UndertowPoetry 168
May 4, 2008untitled (for now)Poetry 223
Apr 23, 2008Fatally WoundedPoetry 200
Apr 13, 2008The New HolocaustPoetry 241
Apr 13, 2008Life Is No FairytalePoetry 279
Apr 11, 2008caged animalPoetry 211
Apr 10, 2008AddictPoetry 228
Apr 10, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 233
Apr 10, 2008Breaking PointPoetry 215
Mar 18, 2008just friendsPoetry 256
Mar 16, 2008our dying americaPoetry 302
Mar 10, 2008One cut too manyPoetry 323
Mar 3, 2008THE EMPTY CHAIR Poetry 356
Mar 3, 2008Inevitable DeparturePoetry 276
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Title article: The New Holocaust
Date: 2008-04-13 17:03:33
about the triple post...
yeah uhm sorry about that...my computer is kinda going haywire...i deleted the other 2 posts

Title article: Beautiful America
Date: 2008-04-13 12:29:32

unfortunately...this is what our world is heading for if we don't change something

Title article: Disgusting
Date: 2008-04-11 04:52:49

wow...this poem was very powerful. if only people would realize what they're doing to themselves and loved ones when they do drugs

Title article: Addict
Date: 2008-04-11 04:50:45

i'll definitely have to check it out

Title article: our dying america
Date: 2008-03-17 13:22:55

ah relax....i'm not for anarchy or anything...just a member of today's youth trying to make sense of things...as for nick 711's comment all i have to say is wtf?

Title article: Alcohol
Date: 2008-03-16 11:16:08

wow i can definitely relate...more so with drugs than alcohol, but they kind ofgo hand in hand anyway. well written!

Title article: Beauty in Death
Date: 2008-03-03 13:35:06

wow...never would've expected that ending

Title article: first poem...so bare with me
Date: 2008-03-03 10:46:05

thanks...do you have any constructive criticism, or something that i should change for my next one?

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Created On: 08/01/2008 16:41:52

Ah, your quote at the bottom.......from "La Mer" which is one of my all time favorite Nine Inch Nails instrumentals.
Feedback from b.k. (b.k.): lol yeah...their instrumentation was amazing on that song

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