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About Myself: writing is simply my escape. i write mostly about what i know. that's not to say that everything i write about has happened to me, it may have just been thoughts or dreams. i don't write a poem a day, or a poem a week...sometimes i won't write for a couple months, it depends on if, when, and where i find inspiration. i don't sugar coat things and ignorance isn't bliss...so if you're looking for those happy go lucky poems i suggest going elsewhere. i appreciate ANY comments, but if you don't like piece i'd like for you to explain why. not saying that i'll change the poem, because i won't, but i'll try to think about it next time i write. well, that was probably boring so i'll end with a quote:
"And when the day arrives I'll become the sky and I'll become the sea and the sea will come to kiss me, for I am going home. Nothing can stop me now.”-trent reznor

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 26, 2008DriftingPoetry 167
Sep 21, 20088 stories upPoetry 138
Aug 19, 2008downward spiralPoetry 162
Jul 30, 2008Thoughts of a SoldierPoetry 282
Jun 18, 2008Dear DadPoetry 233
May 27, 2008my final truthPoetry 208
May 11, 2008Fatal UndertowPoetry 168
May 4, 2008untitled (for now)Poetry 223
Apr 23, 2008Fatally WoundedPoetry 200
Apr 13, 2008The New HolocaustPoetry 241
Apr 13, 2008Life Is No FairytalePoetry 279
Apr 11, 2008caged animalPoetry 211
Apr 10, 2008AddictPoetry 228
Apr 10, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 233
Apr 10, 2008Breaking PointPoetry 215
Mar 18, 2008just friendsPoetry 256
Mar 16, 2008our dying americaPoetry 302
Mar 10, 2008One cut too manyPoetry 323
Mar 3, 2008THE EMPTY CHAIR Poetry 356
Mar 3, 2008Inevitable DeparturePoetry 276
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Title article: Bleeding Out the Past
Date: 2008-05-17 13:03:39

definitely going to my favorites....enjoyed this immensely....i too can relate to these feelings of betrayal and feel that you got the point across extremely well

Title article: I am my Crucifix
Date: 2008-05-17 12:59:33

loved this....most times we truly are our own worst enemies

Title article: I Feel Like Writing a Poem
Date: 2008-05-17 12:56:19

it's good to write a poem just to write one....though humorous i can definitely identify with the feelings of writer's block

Title article: Out of a Coma— And It's Still Beating
Date: 2008-05-17 12:47:35
really really enjoyed this
i think most people feel disconnected from the world at one point in time, and it seems as if only one person can reconnect them again

Title article: My World
Date: 2008-05-17 12:45:40

you described your thoughts well, but i must agree with a previous comment...i do think it was more like a narrative....other than that, your thoughts were conveyed well

Title article: Predators of the Night
Date: 2008-05-17 12:42:56

amazing descriptions...i definitely enjoyed this alot...the wolf isn't too different from humans, now is it? trying their best to provide for their family. there's always rough patches, but most the time it works out.

Title article: Once upon a Twilight Past
Date: 2008-05-17 12:27:42
interesting...
but great nonetheless...i really enjoyed the story and it flowed very well

Title article: Fragile Thoughts
Date: 2008-05-17 12:24:24

yes...the future does look very bleak doesn't it? 
good poem though....keep writing

Title article: Bring Me Down
Date: 2008-05-17 12:22:27
really enjoyed it
i've definitely had these feelings numerous times, and it's horrible that you went through this...but atleast great poetry comes from it

Title article: Just Like Her
Date: 2008-04-25 17:39:40
well gotta say...
i absolutely loved this one. i loved how it was sorrowful yet had a calm accepting undertone.

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 Created On: 08/01/2008 16:41:52
Ah, your quote at the bottom.......from "La Mer" which is one of my all time favorite Nine Inch Nails instrumentals.
Feedback from b.k. (b.k.): lol yeah...their instrumentation was amazing on that song

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