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Cassandra's House, Chapter 1

CASSANDRA'S HOUSE Chapter One...
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About Myself: writing is simply my escape. i write mostly about what i know. that's not to say that everything i write about has happened to me, it may have just been thoughts or dreams. i don't write a poem a day, or a poem a week...sometimes i won't write for a couple months, it depends on if, when, and where i find inspiration. i don't sugar coat things and ignorance isn't bliss...so if you're looking for those happy go lucky poems i suggest going elsewhere. i appreciate ANY comments, but if you don't like piece i'd like for you to explain why. not saying that i'll change the poem, because i won't, but i'll try to think about it next time i write. well, that was probably boring so i'll end with a quote:
"And when the day arrives I'll become the sky and I'll become the sea and the sea will come to kiss me, for I am going home. Nothing can stop me now.”-trent reznor

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 26, 2008DriftingPoetry 167
Sep 21, 20088 stories upPoetry 138
Aug 19, 2008downward spiralPoetry 162
Jul 30, 2008Thoughts of a SoldierPoetry 282
Jun 18, 2008Dear DadPoetry 233
May 27, 2008my final truthPoetry 208
May 11, 2008Fatal UndertowPoetry 168
May 4, 2008untitled (for now)Poetry 223
Apr 23, 2008Fatally WoundedPoetry 200
Apr 13, 2008The New HolocaustPoetry 241
Apr 13, 2008Life Is No FairytalePoetry 279
Apr 11, 2008caged animalPoetry 211
Apr 10, 2008AddictPoetry 228
Apr 10, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 233
Apr 10, 2008Breaking PointPoetry 215
Mar 18, 2008just friendsPoetry 256
Mar 16, 2008our dying americaPoetry 302
Mar 10, 2008One cut too manyPoetry 323
Mar 3, 2008THE EMPTY CHAIR Poetry 356
Mar 3, 2008Inevitable DeparturePoetry 276
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Title article: I Pledge Allegiance
Date: 2008-05-27 19:08:20

finally some truth... 
and lemon, you don't have to be anti-government to oppose some of the things the corrupted people do. if it hadn't been for opposition women wouldn't be voting and slaves would still be common.

Title article: Why Do I Cry
Date: 2008-05-26 08:58:32

i really really liked this...for each girl wishes to be the other, yet the other wishes to be someone else. the message was great, keep writing!

Title article: they say
Date: 2008-05-26 08:55:29

everything seems to be blamed on mental illness these days doesn't it? i liked the poem though, and the humorous tone it had to it.

Title article: Hate
Date: 2008-05-26 08:53:00

short, yet the point was well taken. i liked the simple yet hostile mood of the poem.

Title article: The Grass is Greener
Date: 2008-05-26 08:50:56

i thought it was going to be sad throughout, but i like how it showed that there was a silver lining to the cloud. liked this alot, keep em coming

Title article: Screaming
Date: 2008-05-26 08:46:57

ah it truly is the worst thing in the world when you realize that there's absolutely no one....anyway well written, you expressed the sorrow very well

Title article: Ouch
Date: 2008-05-26 08:44:19

good poem...one of the few on here that are more humorous than serious

Title article: The Attack
Date: 2008-05-26 08:42:23

this is definitely one of the best poems i've ever read. i loved the metaphor, it seemed to fit perfectly.

Title article: You're a Goddess.
Date: 2008-05-26 08:39:35
liked it.
but unfortunately for me it's unrealistic. for i find that when you hold a person on a high pedestal you only set yourself up for heartache and failure...then again it may just be me.

Title article: For There Is Nothing Up Above
Date: 2008-05-26 08:33:32

this is going to my favorites. there is no god, and if there is i definitely don't wish to follow him if he lets all this pain, anger, and hate into the world.

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 Created On: 08/01/2008 16:41:52
Ah, your quote at the bottom.......from "La Mer" which is one of my all time favorite Nine Inch Nails instrumentals.
Feedback from b.k. (b.k.): lol yeah...their instrumentation was amazing on that song

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