The Highwayman (Based on a poem by A. Noyes.)

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Cassandra's House, Chapter 1

CASSANDRA'S HOUSE Chapter One...
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About Myself: writing is simply my escape. i write mostly about what i know. that's not to say that everything i write about has happened to me, it may have just been thoughts or dreams. i don't write a poem a day, or a poem a week...sometimes i won't write for a couple months, it depends on if, when, and where i find inspiration. i don't sugar coat things and ignorance isn't bliss...so if you're looking for those happy go lucky poems i suggest going elsewhere. i appreciate ANY comments, but if you don't like piece i'd like for you to explain why. not saying that i'll change the poem, because i won't, but i'll try to think about it next time i write. well, that was probably boring so i'll end with a quote:
"And when the day arrives I'll become the sky and I'll become the sea and the sea will come to kiss me, for I am going home. Nothing can stop me now.”-trent reznor

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 26, 2008DriftingPoetry 167
Sep 21, 20088 stories upPoetry 138
Aug 19, 2008downward spiralPoetry 162
Jul 30, 2008Thoughts of a SoldierPoetry 282
Jun 18, 2008Dear DadPoetry 233
May 27, 2008my final truthPoetry 208
May 11, 2008Fatal UndertowPoetry 168
May 4, 2008untitled (for now)Poetry 223
Apr 23, 2008Fatally WoundedPoetry 200
Apr 13, 2008The New HolocaustPoetry 241
Apr 13, 2008Life Is No FairytalePoetry 279
Apr 11, 2008caged animalPoetry 211
Apr 10, 2008AddictPoetry 228
Apr 10, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 233
Apr 10, 2008Breaking PointPoetry 215
Mar 18, 2008just friendsPoetry 256
Mar 16, 2008our dying americaPoetry 302
Mar 10, 2008One cut too manyPoetry 323
Mar 3, 2008THE EMPTY CHAIR Poetry 356
Mar 3, 2008Inevitable DeparturePoetry 276
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Title article: Lemon: a Haiku
Date: 2008-08-26 19:08:36

first time i read it, i didn't care for it too much...the second time through, i liked it...funny how that works...for your first haiku it's not bad at all

Title article: Trying to Concentrate on Freedom
Date: 2008-08-26 19:01:43

amazing account of the horrors people faced in world war II...though for some reason it seemed to read more like a short story for me ...then again, that's most likely just me

Title article: Will We Meet Again?
Date: 2008-08-26 18:55:00

what happened to the glimpse of hope that we saw a couple poems back? nonetheless it's really good, the third stanza was my favorite and for some reasong it really stuck out

Title article: downward spiral
Date: 2008-08-20 20:22:38

oh definitely...i like johnny cash, and had nothing but respect for him...but there won't ever be anything better than the original

Title article: downward spiral
Date: 2008-08-20 19:54:08

those are all good as well...though all of the songs are fantastic...i don't think i've heard that version of "hurt", but i'll have to check it out...i just said the "original" version because of the johnny cash cover

Title article: downward spiral
Date: 2008-08-20 18:06:39

well my favorite tracks (since it's nearly impossible to pick just one) were "the becoming", "big man with a gun", and the original version of "hurt".....also, though i found it to be a bit overplayed, i liked "closer" as well....reznor is a fucking genius

Title article: Dedication
Date: 2008-08-19 23:08:54
hmmm...
is that a bit of hope i see? i must say this is my favorite out of all your poems

Title article: Postcard
Date: 2008-08-18 21:25:05

cleverly written, and the metaphors were great. this story shows that beauty truly is in the eyes of the beholder.

Title article: ?
Date: 2008-08-18 21:16:41

i may be wrong, but i believe this is the first piece of yours i've ever read...and i definitely look forward to more.

Title article: The Darkness Inside
Date: 2008-08-18 21:14:21

i think most people eventually asks themself that question, and the emotions that go along with it were well conveyed. the inconsistent rhyming made the poem, to me, better...and that is a rare thing

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 Created On: 08/01/2008 16:41:52
Ah, your quote at the bottom.......from "La Mer" which is one of my all time favorite Nine Inch Nails instrumentals.
Feedback from b.k. (b.k.): lol yeah...their instrumentation was amazing on that song

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