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Cassandra's House, Chapter 1

CASSANDRA'S HOUSE Chapter One...
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About Myself: writing is simply my escape. i write mostly about what i know. that's not to say that everything i write about has happened to me, it may have just been thoughts or dreams. i don't write a poem a day, or a poem a week...sometimes i won't write for a couple months, it depends on if, when, and where i find inspiration. i don't sugar coat things and ignorance isn't bliss...so if you're looking for those happy go lucky poems i suggest going elsewhere. i appreciate ANY comments, but if you don't like piece i'd like for you to explain why. not saying that i'll change the poem, because i won't, but i'll try to think about it next time i write. well, that was probably boring so i'll end with a quote:
"And when the day arrives I'll become the sky and I'll become the sea and the sea will come to kiss me, for I am going home. Nothing can stop me now.”-trent reznor

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 26, 2008DriftingPoetry 167
Sep 21, 20088 stories upPoetry 138
Aug 19, 2008downward spiralPoetry 162
Jul 30, 2008Thoughts of a SoldierPoetry 282
Jun 18, 2008Dear DadPoetry 233
May 27, 2008my final truthPoetry 208
May 11, 2008Fatal UndertowPoetry 168
May 4, 2008untitled (for now)Poetry 223
Apr 23, 2008Fatally WoundedPoetry 200
Apr 13, 2008The New HolocaustPoetry 241
Apr 13, 2008Life Is No FairytalePoetry 279
Apr 11, 2008caged animalPoetry 211
Apr 10, 2008AddictPoetry 228
Apr 10, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 233
Apr 10, 2008Breaking PointPoetry 215
Mar 18, 2008just friendsPoetry 256
Mar 16, 2008our dying americaPoetry 303
Mar 10, 2008One cut too manyPoetry 323
Mar 3, 2008THE EMPTY CHAIR Poetry 356
Mar 3, 2008Inevitable DeparturePoetry 277
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Total number of comments: 76

Title article: Lost
Date: 2008-12-25 07:05:44

short and not so sweet, but i really liked it. i imagine everyone, at one atleast one point in their life, realizes that they're 'lost', and this describes the feelings well.

Title article: Shotgun
Date: 2008-12-25 07:02:03

i personally found that the disorganized thoughts added to the poem...honestly, who's thinking clearly when they're getting ready to commit suicide? oh well, i guess it's the whole "different strokes" thing

Title article: On the Shore of Lost Cause
Date: 2008-12-14 19:33:03

beautiful...but the following lines stood out the most in my opinion: 
"Come nightfall I'm just watching fate  
Desperately looking for any sign of escape  
Pretending I am not alone all of the time  
Too many lost pieces, the riddles and the rhymes"

Title article: They are the Dead
Date: 2008-09-24 18:19:18

excellent...both in structure and message. people don't think for themselves anymore, and instead go with what's popular...the whole disney channel craze just multiplies it by a hundred. i loved the metaphors as well.

Title article: Panhandling Scum
Date: 2008-09-21 14:18:44

terrible how humanity seems to die out more and more each day. condescending assholes stare down their noses at everyone and anyone who don't live up to their standards. great job portraying this.

Title article: Trained to Kill
Date: 2008-09-21 14:16:54

i'm practically speechless. i can't believe i never read anything of yours before. the imagery was amazing, and the flow was flawless.

Title article: BrEAth
Date: 2008-09-21 12:51:32

very original...i liked the almost, for lack of a better word, choppy thoughts...and it was easy to read through

Title article: Randumb
Date: 2008-09-21 12:48:06

i liked the poem, and the style in which you wrote it...it was pretty good, and i definitely would read more that are written in this structure (or maybe lack of structure)

Title article: Bleeding Sea
Date: 2008-09-21 10:12:13

well, as always, i loved it....i honestly don't think there are enough positive adjectives to describe this....the end really made an impact and tied it together...after i finished reading it i realized that the entire time i had been reading it to a melody...if you ever chose to, i believe you'd have a very good chance at a songwriting career

Title article: after that afternoon
Date: 2008-08-26 19:10:41

i liked this...for me it had a very zen feeling to it, which i tend to like...i did get a tad bit confused though

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 Created On: 08/01/2008 16:41:52
Ah, your quote at the bottom.......from "La Mer" which is one of my all time favorite Nine Inch Nails instrumentals.
Feedback from b.k. (b.k.): lol yeah...their instrumentation was amazing on that song

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