Echoes of the previous Life.

(my old writing, I wonder if there are visible...

Lord Have Mercy #1+2

Chapter 1 The year was 2003, the country was killing...
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Michelle Huff (allmine)
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Website/Blog: www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=133749
About Myself: "I'm not bad, I'm just drawn that way...."

The world is perfect with the right man holding me tight and whispering in my ear, I love and you and want to take care of you forever.....And if you believe that load of crap then you are just as fucking delusional as I am.

I have a poem in a contest. Please click on the link above and leave a comment. Thanks...

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 31, 2008Happy New YearMiscellaneous Stories 74
Dec 23, 2008How Many WaysPoetry 328
Dec 15, 2008One DayPoetry 449
Oct 22, 2008A Storiesville WeddingPoetry 378
Oct 10, 2008It's a Matter of ImportanceRomance 1380
Oct 3, 2008MiseryPoetry 380
Sep 25, 2008But Did He?Poetry 549
Sep 15, 2008May and DecemberPoetry 750
Sep 10, 2008WhoreMiscellaneous Stories 1099
Aug 22, 2008My PresentPoetry 604
Aug 13, 2008The DragonPoetry 1112
Aug 5, 2008PassionRomance 1415
Jul 8, 2008The LetterRomance 972
Jun 5, 2008What Am I?Poetry 536
Jun 2, 2008More ImportantPoetry 429
May 30, 2008The Boys in Her LifePoetry 442
May 19, 2008Number 1Poetry 517
May 19, 2008Why Do I CryPoetry 847
May 5, 2008True Love MeansPoetry 771
May 5, 20081500 DaysRomance 662
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Comments

Title article: ASH WEDNESDAY.
Date: 2008-10-22 08:57:38

You have had a lot of nun stories on here lately..and I know that I need to read them all. The sadness that fills their hearts, it's so deep. I want them to find joy in something

Title article: I Watched the World Die to Winter
Date: 2008-10-22 08:53:13

Interesting...I like how you compared real autumn to the autumn of our life. Don't force the rhyme, it makes it sound stilted. Go for flow over rhyme

Title article: To Spinsterhood
Date: 2008-10-22 08:50:47

First off, make the font easier to read. My eyes can't take it. It is very poetic in nature, did you mean for it to be a loose poem? But I had no idea what you were trying to say. I mean I get the general gist, but...and maybe it's the font...I dunno...

Title article: A Confused Heart
Date: 2008-10-22 08:48:43

Eh...does he love her or not? Does he treat her like crap or does he just ignore her? I am trying to get what emotion I should feel out of this poem. Good flow, but I think the first stanza last line you want to be "never" and not "ever"

Title article: How Was Your Weekend?
Date: 2008-10-22 08:38:44

This was really cute. I loved how what started out as a get crap done day turned into a f^&k it all weekend. It always seems to work that way doesn't it? I almost spewed when you talked about Buckcherry...cause I am of the opinion that Crazy Bi%^h was written just for me...

Title article: The Cheat
Date: 2008-10-22 08:17:50

Oooh Jessica I like this. It's very dark and very twisted and it brings out our inner beast. I know what you are trying to say. Why is it that there is always another girl? Seriously....great job

Title article: Elijah
Date: 2008-10-21 12:19:27

That was a brilliant story. Loved the heartwrenching he gets by having to take these children away. Very touching, very moving, and I could see this going further...

Title article: CONVERSATION: VINTAGE FEELINGS
Date: 2008-10-17 08:18:18

And the point of this was? I am sorry but I don't see one. Maybe if there was a story to go with this..or a reaction or something? I dunno, but to me it looks like you cut and pasted an IM conversation into here

Title article: PeripheReal
Date: 2008-10-17 08:09:28

This is a very unusual story...not bad, just different. I feel a Stephen King movie coming out of this. You're grammer could use a little help and I want to know how this went from a story about seeing things out of the corner of your eyes to a story about weird cats?

Title article: The Lady in Red
Date: 2008-10-17 07:53:05

This is a good poem, very well written. My only question is...is this really a sex thing, or a vampire thing? Or is it an illusion in his mind? Cause you kinda hinted at all those...

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01/06/2009 07:43:58Re:Sequel to the Nightmare Before Christmas?Off-Topic317
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R.E.Potter (r.e.potter)

cyberspace
 Created On: 12/30/2008 11:24:12
Just checking in and saying hi. Thanks for all your nice comments on all my stuff that has passed through. Listen, when you gonna dump Roger and run away with a (real man)
Billy (Vango)

 Created On: 11/25/2008 11:03:59
You are such a great writer

Lisa (antheerr)

 Created On: 11/08/2008 05:01:59
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW - where are the awesome pictures dad told me about?
Feedback from Michelle Huff (allmine): Gone I only had them up for a week
J. Dane Tyler (DarcKnyt)

Here!
 Created On: 10/17/2008 13:49:36
Hey! This is just a little forget-me-not.

I've been so glad we've gotten to know each other here on Storiesville, and I can't wait for more of your amazing work.

Have a great weekend.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

 Created On: 10/12/2008 16:51:27
why thank you for the comment on my lemony picture lol

I figured it was about time you all knew what i REALLY looked like

Lisa (antheerr)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 05:45:39
Thought I should say Hi seeing as you seem to rule the roost.

R.E.Potter (r.e.potter)

not sure where im at
 Created On: 09/29/2008 18:32:45
Just thought I'd pop in and say hey....so hey.

Helen Moore (HelentheCelt)

Far Far Away
 Created On: 09/10/2008 11:07:36
Hello fellow writer...

love your work

keep in touch

love and hugs xxx

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire
 Created On: 09/03/2008 08:52:38
Birthday? Nobody told me.......errr Happy Birthday mama.

Phil
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

a wasteland
 Created On: 07/03/2008 23:16:54
A zombie wishes you a happy birthday!

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