An unexpected gift, Chapter 1

(Author's note: It's the first chapter to an attempt...

Leaving

Leaving Fall has always been my...
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Website/Blog: www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=133749
About Myself: "I'm not bad, I'm just drawn that way...."

The world is perfect with the right man holding me tight and whispering in my ear, I love and you and want to take care of you forever.....And if you believe that load of crap then you are just as fucking delusional as I am.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 31, 2008Happy New YearMiscellaneous Stories 74
Dec 23, 2008How Many WaysPoetry 333
Dec 15, 2008One DayPoetry 449
Oct 22, 2008A Storiesville WeddingPoetry 378
Oct 10, 2008It's a Matter of ImportanceRomance 1380
Oct 3, 2008MiseryPoetry 380
Sep 25, 2008But Did He?Poetry 549
Sep 15, 2008May and DecemberPoetry 751
Sep 10, 2008WhoreMiscellaneous Stories 1100
Aug 22, 2008My PresentPoetry 605
Aug 13, 2008The DragonPoetry 1112
Aug 5, 2008PassionRomance 1415
Jul 8, 2008The LetterRomance 972
Jun 5, 2008What Am I?Poetry 536
Jun 2, 2008More ImportantPoetry 429
May 30, 2008The Boys in Her LifePoetry 443
May 19, 2008Number 1Poetry 517
May 19, 2008Why Do I CryPoetry 847
May 5, 2008True Love MeansPoetry 771
May 5, 20081500 DaysRomance 662
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Comments

Title article: Funeral Passing
Date: 2008-09-22 14:36:56

Oh my, this is hysterical in a fucked up kind of way. Your stories crack me up and this was one of your more well written ones too. What is it with guys getting hard at the thought of two girls kissing?

Title article: She Said
Date: 2008-09-22 14:32:06

You know how unbearable painful it is to have your man leave you? Even if he thinks he is doing it for the right reasons? If she asks you to stay, its cause she wants you there. Always tell your woman how much you love her and how much you care, otherwise, it'll tear her apart

Title article: Survival, Chapter 15
Date: 2008-09-22 08:06:33

Nope, he got one of those tropical technical viruses. Where not only your plane crashes, but your connection with the world crashes too..... 
 
His computer crashed and he didn't get all of this until Thursday...so I was a little nice to him since it wasn't his fault

Title article: Survival, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-22 07:50:14

Sorry..I'll fix your name in a minute....hey Prithwish, you were honest about it from the beginning, you and Dirkin both, so I wasn't nasty to you guys....

Title article: Tell Me That You Love Me
Date: 2008-09-22 07:48:20

I love both the old English words and the simple poem after. Especially since they are some of the same words I am feeling right now in my heart. I love how he loses his nerve at the end and walks away. How many times has that happened I wonder. If he would just be able to get it out....

Title article: Killswitch
Date: 2008-09-22 07:40:55

More? Mmm..now this I am dying to see....like I say, Elie had to wait for 2 years for Dante to sort through his crap and finally figure out that she was the one that he wanted. She must be one hell of a woman to hang on that long, but she loves him and knows that it is necessary. Adversity makes the emotions stronger, creates a better bond. I am hoping like hell that through this all, Dante did let her know that he did feel for her...and didn't leave her hanging. Waiting is that hardest part, and loving someone without getting it in return is the worst. Doesn't take but 30 seconds to let someone know how you feel. Ok, I am out of letters to use on this comment, but I would love to read more of this story....would love to see what you add.

Title article: Survival, Chapter 20
Date: 2008-09-19 14:10:32

I can't really comment on my own writing, but I enjoyed this, the whole thing. Not just the epilogue which is my writing!!! How do you guys think it went? Feedback people feedback!!!!

Title article: Survival, Chapter 19
Date: 2008-09-19 14:08:16

See...I knew you had a thing for me, hahahaha. I love how you were talking to Max about the best way to kill Bambi, that's just wrong on so many levels. This is what I needed last night to make me laugh. Great hysterical story. You definitely have the gift of comedy

Title article: Survival, Chapter 17
Date: 2008-09-19 14:05:26

Was there even four girls on the plane? You know I guess there was! And you didn't take advantage of them huh? Wow. I love when you started rambling at the beginning, cause you kow that's what would happen if you were nervous!

Title article: Survival, Chapter 16
Date: 2008-09-19 13:59:53

How'd you get into a police station room?

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stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe)

cyberspace
 Created On: 12/30/2008 11:24:12
Just checking in and saying hi. Thanks for all your nice comments on all my stuff that has passed through. Listen, when you gonna dump Roger and run away with a (real man)
Billy (Vango)

 Created On: 11/25/2008 11:03:59
You are such a great writer

Lisa (antheerr)

 Created On: 11/08/2008 05:01:59
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW - where are the awesome pictures dad told me about?
Feedback from Michelle Huff (allmine): Gone I only had them up for a week
J. Dane Tyler (DarcKnyt)

Here!
 Created On: 10/17/2008 13:49:36
Hey! This is just a little forget-me-not.

I've been so glad we've gotten to know each other here on Storiesville, and I can't wait for more of your amazing work.

Have a great weekend.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

 Created On: 10/12/2008 16:51:27
why thank you for the comment on my lemony picture lol

I figured it was about time you all knew what i REALLY looked like

Lisa (antheerr)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 05:45:39
Thought I should say Hi seeing as you seem to rule the roost.

stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe)

not sure where im at
 Created On: 09/29/2008 18:32:45
Just thought I'd pop in and say hey....so hey.

Helen Moore (HelentheCelt)

Far Far Away
 Created On: 09/10/2008 11:07:36
Hello fellow writer...

love your work

keep in touch

love and hugs xxx

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire
 Created On: 09/03/2008 08:52:38
Birthday? Nobody told me.......errr Happy Birthday mama.

Phil
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A zombie wishes you a happy birthday!

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