Cassandra's House, Chapter 1

CASSANDRA'S HOUSE Chapter One...

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There are times in our lives when it seems that Life...
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Website/Blog: www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=133749
About Myself: "I'm not bad, I'm just drawn that way...."

The world is perfect with the right man holding me tight and whispering in my ear, I love and you and want to take care of you forever.....And if you believe that load of crap then you are just as fucking delusional as I am.

I have a poem in a contest. Please click on the link above and leave a comment. Thanks...

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 31, 2008Happy New YearMiscellaneous Stories 74
Dec 23, 2008How Many WaysPoetry 328
Dec 15, 2008One DayPoetry 449
Oct 22, 2008A Storiesville WeddingPoetry 378
Oct 10, 2008It's a Matter of ImportanceRomance 1380
Oct 3, 2008MiseryPoetry 380
Sep 25, 2008But Did He?Poetry 549
Sep 15, 2008May and DecemberPoetry 750
Sep 10, 2008WhoreMiscellaneous Stories 1099
Aug 22, 2008My PresentPoetry 604
Aug 13, 2008The DragonPoetry 1112
Aug 5, 2008PassionRomance 1415
Jul 8, 2008The LetterRomance 972
Jun 5, 2008What Am I?Poetry 536
Jun 2, 2008More ImportantPoetry 429
May 30, 2008The Boys in Her LifePoetry 442
May 19, 2008Number 1Poetry 517
May 19, 2008Why Do I CryPoetry 847
May 5, 2008True Love MeansPoetry 771
May 5, 20081500 DaysRomance 662
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Comments

Title article: On the Shore of Lost Cause
Date: 2008-12-16 09:02:38

Your poetry is so deep, so dark, so heart wrenching. It touches me deep down inside somewhere. This one made me think of a person on the beach deep in depression, wondering if he still had a life, or if he was just existing. Fabulous work

Title article: Darkening
Date: 2008-12-15 12:25:08

The first paragraph or two...WOW fantastic intro. Eyecathicvhg, suspensful, whatever else I am trying to say here. Was fabulous. The further we got into the story, the more lost I seemed to get. I couldn't seem to differentiate between the men in the story...who was good, who was bad, who was real, who was fictitious. Some run on sentences (but you are getting better!!) and a few grammer boo boo....like once you wrote there and it should be they're, but overall a good story 
 
Just make a it a little clearer for the average reader who doesn't know where the story is coming from or where it is going...ya know what I mean?

Title article: Invasion©- chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-12 12:13:13

I had to read it, it's yours...even though I should be working on other crap... 
 
It's good, I have the Close Encounters of the Third Kind theme running through my head...yes I just proved that I am old....more please!

Title article: Dominate the House
Date: 2008-11-12 12:09:50

I was in a melodramatic mood and I thought, what the hell, Jason always cheers me up. Dude, you are seriously fucked up in the head. This was way kinky, and I know kinky! It was hysterical that he kept calling the guy different names.....you're crazy!!! Of course, so am I....

Title article: Halloween, Chapter 20
Date: 2008-11-04 07:50:59

Bend over baby...whoops this is a public forum!

Title article: Halloween, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-11-03 07:21:56

Whoo hoo, I freaked Jason out! High Five back!!!

Title article: A Storiesville Wedding
Date: 2008-10-28 07:40:18

Well Potter....depends on who's there, now doesn't it? You offering?

Title article: A Storiesville Wedding
Date: 2008-10-28 07:29:30

Actually Nathan, I was going to have you there filming all of it, but then I decided that it was already too damn long!!!

Title article: The Dragon
Date: 2008-10-27 10:31:36

Nope, I am saying that fairy tales don't exist. Reality is always there to mess it up....

Title article: JAR.(Disturbing image.)
Date: 2008-10-24 16:23:06

Oh how horrific and sad and 500 other words that encompass grief and grotesqueness. I can only imagine at the harshness of having to make the decision to abort a child, adn I can't imagine losing my baby after carrying it and loving it for so long. I think I am going to go home and kiss my baby....

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R.E.Potter (r.e.potter)

cyberspace
 Created On: 12/30/2008 11:24:12
Just checking in and saying hi. Thanks for all your nice comments on all my stuff that has passed through. Listen, when you gonna dump Roger and run away with a (real man)
Billy (Vango)

 Created On: 11/25/2008 11:03:59
You are such a great writer

Lisa (antheerr)

 Created On: 11/08/2008 05:01:59
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW - where are the awesome pictures dad told me about?
Feedback from Michelle Huff (allmine): Gone I only had them up for a week
J. Dane Tyler (DarcKnyt)

Here!
 Created On: 10/17/2008 13:49:36
Hey! This is just a little forget-me-not.

I've been so glad we've gotten to know each other here on Storiesville, and I can't wait for more of your amazing work.

Have a great weekend.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

 Created On: 10/12/2008 16:51:27
why thank you for the comment on my lemony picture lol

I figured it was about time you all knew what i REALLY looked like

Lisa (antheerr)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 05:45:39
Thought I should say Hi seeing as you seem to rule the roost.

R.E.Potter (r.e.potter)

not sure where im at
 Created On: 09/29/2008 18:32:45
Just thought I'd pop in and say hey....so hey.

Helen Moore (HelentheCelt)

Far Far Away
 Created On: 09/10/2008 11:07:36
Hello fellow writer...

love your work

keep in touch

love and hugs xxx

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire
 Created On: 09/03/2008 08:52:38
Birthday? Nobody told me.......errr Happy Birthday mama.

Phil
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

a wasteland
 Created On: 07/03/2008 23:16:54
A zombie wishes you a happy birthday!

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