Echoes of the previous Life.

(my old writing, I wonder if there are visible...

At Your Command

Sinai 31st July Dear God...
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Michelle Huff (allmine)
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Website/Blog: www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=133749
About Myself: "I'm not bad, I'm just drawn that way...."

The world is perfect with the right man holding me tight and whispering in my ear, I love and you and want to take care of you forever.....And if you believe that load of crap then you are just as fucking delusional as I am.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 31, 2008Happy New YearMiscellaneous Stories 74
Dec 23, 2008How Many WaysPoetry 333
Dec 15, 2008One DayPoetry 449
Oct 22, 2008A Storiesville WeddingPoetry 378
Oct 10, 2008It's a Matter of ImportanceRomance 1380
Oct 3, 2008MiseryPoetry 380
Sep 25, 2008But Did He?Poetry 549
Sep 15, 2008May and DecemberPoetry 751
Sep 10, 2008WhoreMiscellaneous Stories 1100
Aug 22, 2008My PresentPoetry 605
Aug 13, 2008The DragonPoetry 1112
Aug 5, 2008PassionRomance 1415
Jul 8, 2008The LetterRomance 972
Jun 5, 2008What Am I?Poetry 536
Jun 2, 2008More ImportantPoetry 429
May 30, 2008The Boys in Her LifePoetry 443
May 19, 2008Number 1Poetry 517
May 19, 2008Why Do I CryPoetry 847
May 5, 2008True Love MeansPoetry 771
May 5, 20081500 DaysRomance 662
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Comments

Total number of comments: 589

Title article: On Call
Date: 2009-01-07 15:04:08

Fabulous idea for sure, and a very lovely twist ending...but like the others say, there is something missing. I don't feel that horrific feel that I should get when I am reading this story. Maybe some more should be added onto it...not sure, but keep working on it cause it is a terrific idea

Title article: Plague, Chapter 2
Date: 2009-01-07 14:59:07

Why didn't you tell me that you had written another chapter. You sure that you're only 15? Cause you think and write like a 30 year old. Fantastic Maxie fantastic. I can't wait to see where we are going next!

Title article: Meet Again
Date: 2009-01-06 14:59:46

Started off awesome...then didn't go anywhere. I love the imagery of the broken angels, fabulous stuff. Then it just went blah...maybe it's just me! I do like the last stanza, even if it isn't in the same meter as the rest of the poem. Still heartwrenching, but this one isn't as dismal as some of you other work

Title article: Monitor
Date: 2009-01-06 14:54:56

Dude this is totally weird, but I was thinking about this story this weekend. I so remember when you had it posted before, and it is as awesome now as it was then. How weird that I was thinkiing about this story and then here it is....hmmm....

Title article: Her Words Are Flowers
Date: 2009-01-06 11:46:53

Yeah, but most guys can't comprehend the feeling of love at all....or how to treat themselves or others....

Title article: POND.
Date: 2009-01-06 11:42:32

Another story that touched my heart and soul. This one was even better than some of your others. I think because they weren't ashamed by their act as if they were doing something wrong....they simply just loved one another. Beautiful....

Title article: Delete 'n Recycle
Date: 2009-01-06 11:37:37

Very nice and so true of a society that we live in today. Have to watch who we let into our virtual world. I loved how you used the computer terms when talking about the human element. Proves that we aren't computers and that things aren't so easily solved. Though if you have seen Windows Vista.....things aren't easily solved there either...hahahahaha!!!

Title article: Angel of Music
Date: 2009-01-06 11:29:09

Personally I think that the metaphor of music is for something else entirely. He makes her body sing. I have been looking at the title all day long and I keep getting that Phantom of the Opera song in my head. This was very lyrical and well written...

Title article: Into Theirs-new edited version
Date: 2009-01-06 11:17:57

Not a bad poem, you might want to break it up into stanzas so that the average human brain can read it easier. This poem reminded me of a story I read as a little girl...it wasn't that long ago Potter...about a native Amrican Indian who is forced to move to the city. Keep up the good work

Title article: Flight of Eagles
Date: 2009-01-06 11:12:34

Awesome poem, so simplistic and easy. I love how you show nature's repetitive cycle. Beautifully done...and so easily understood by all, even those that are not poem affecionados

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stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe)

cyberspace
 Created On: 12/30/2008 11:24:12
Just checking in and saying hi. Thanks for all your nice comments on all my stuff that has passed through. Listen, when you gonna dump Roger and run away with a (real man)
Billy (Vango)

 Created On: 11/25/2008 11:03:59
You are such a great writer

Lisa (antheerr)

 Created On: 11/08/2008 05:01:59
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW - where are the awesome pictures dad told me about?
Feedback from Michelle Huff (allmine): Gone I only had them up for a week
J. Dane Tyler (DarcKnyt)

Here!
 Created On: 10/17/2008 13:49:36
Hey! This is just a little forget-me-not.

I've been so glad we've gotten to know each other here on Storiesville, and I can't wait for more of your amazing work.

Have a great weekend.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

 Created On: 10/12/2008 16:51:27
why thank you for the comment on my lemony picture lol

I figured it was about time you all knew what i REALLY looked like

Lisa (antheerr)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 05:45:39
Thought I should say Hi seeing as you seem to rule the roost.

stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe)

not sure where im at
 Created On: 09/29/2008 18:32:45
Just thought I'd pop in and say hey....so hey.

Helen Moore (HelentheCelt)

Far Far Away
 Created On: 09/10/2008 11:07:36
Hello fellow writer...

love your work

keep in touch

love and hugs xxx

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire
 Created On: 09/03/2008 08:52:38
Birthday? Nobody told me.......errr Happy Birthday mama.

Phil
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

a wasteland
 Created On: 07/03/2008 23:16:54
A zombie wishes you a happy birthday!

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