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Member Since	02/11/2008
Last Online	09/16/2008
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Children of this site... its past your bed time.

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Title article: Wiggedy Wack
Date: 2008-07-08 21:53:13

See, now thats racist...wiggers. im offended and appaled...admin, take care of my white trash.

Title article: Wiggedy Wack
Date: 2008-07-08 21:38:58

which was? Turn this site into rapville and the neighborhood will go down in flames...oh, was that a racist remark. Scratch that. Don't want to get the natives restless. Oh that was terrible... your rap that is...and your point to this was...

Title article: This World is Cold
Date: 2008-07-08 21:33:19

What is this about my dear Amatayo. Kinda like to know what I just read, but then I just read a rap song on here, so I will give this a 5...at least you seem to kno who you are.

Title article: M-T Barrel Bar
Date: 2008-07-08 21:26:52

ok
Thats a crazy name to have... strunk. Do u get teased by it. My last name is Littlecox so I feel your pain. Thought the story was ok, didn't stink like a skunk strunk.

Title article: Wiggedy Wack
Date: 2008-07-08 21:19:32

Tupac your not, but thats a good thing since he's dead. First of all, I hate rap. I make no excuse for my whiteness. Lets see, ive read a kindergarten poem called bubbly and now a terrible rap song my a wanna be Negra. I have nothing against the negra man,,but dude, rap sucks. You are white arent ya...hope I didn't offend you.

Title article: Frantic, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-08 21:11:10

Hey mikey,,I like it
Not sure what to make of this story. In the beginning it was a lil confusing. But overall I guess it was a cool story. Laughing at your other comment about Bruce Willis staring the role...yippee I yo mother fucker. Would be perfect. Had some intense paragraphs and im not sure who Christopher is, Im guessing The alter ego of Frantic... Whats the guys story anyway. Ya know, im gonna change my comment to simply.. pretty awesome dude.

Title article: One for the Road
Date: 2008-06-28 12:06:26

Its weird,,but I didn't mind this. valiant effort.

Title article: I will forget
Date: 2008-06-28 11:56:10

This was quick and simple but I really liked it...it had meaning.

Title article: Detached
Date: 2008-06-28 11:51:29

sorry, but i feel a little detached from this poem. Didn't quite understand

Title article: July Wind
Date: 2008-06-27 18:24:19

giving it a 4
Didn't mind it, thought it was kinda good. Not that I really undersatnd it, but it read well. Im not sure, well, yes I am, but sub consciousness is one word.

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Christian Wright (The 13th) Ireland	Created On: 07/14/2008 12:07:46 I know I'm gonna regret this because one day youre gonna slag off my story.But your comments crack me up.

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