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A Ticket to Tewkesbury

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About Myself: Children of this site... its past your bed time.

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Title article: On The Mend
Date: 2008-07-17 21:11:17

I know where you are at my dear...storiesville. ok, that was lame even by my standards. Nice poem ms sour puss(hence..lemon)

Title article: Home Invaders
Date: 2008-07-17 21:06:25

Oh I have one of those...a 3 year old from hell. she has a temper just like this lil girl,,I think mine gets it from her mother. I like stories about home invasion, I could just imagine how horrific that would be, and to threaten your innocent child. I hate people sometimes. What gives people the right to take someones life. ok, im getting off the subject and going into my rant about human indignance...is that a word. huh,sounded good. Im in a good mood tonight,,momma promised me some later on so ill give this a 5 becuse it was so like my child at the end.

Title article: Day of Revelation
Date: 2008-07-17 20:58:52

Missed this little gem. This was actually good, I bought into the fact that it was the apocolypes-end of the world sort of thing, and a happy ending to boot. Ya know, I once got laid in a barn, she was one baaaaaaaaaaa-d ass peice of gyro

Title article: BURROWED
Date: 2008-07-17 20:51:24

c'mon..lets talk about this ok. There is no way I can accept this story as worthy, even for fiction. Even though man is capable of cutting off a limb with a pocket knife to survive, which is documented...I can't buy into the fact that a talking alien wasp would wedge himself in a guys foot from when he was a kid at a sluge pond and then start the itch from hell years later...ill end with my first word from this comment..c'mon

Title article: Our Lad Ricky - Enlistment, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-17 20:36:28

I usually leave an hardcore comment, but my hats off to any service men. From a cook in the mess hall to the boys on the front line. I salute you.

Title article: To Whom It May Concern
Date: 2008-07-13 19:13:47

And no Brandon, im not a writer, but I did play one on tv. I was a writer in the day and a murderous rapest at night. I got caught, but I became a hero from the tabloids and made millions when I got out of jail because the cop didn't put a period on my paper after reading me my writes...my lawyer got me off on that technicality. god, judges on dumb. Sad part is...thats reality.

Title article: To Whom It May Concern
Date: 2008-07-13 19:05:36

No problem with kids. I myself am 27, a kid in my own right. But I am not dumb. You would be a fool not to see what this society has done to our future.  
Example given in this story sums it up, it happens alot. This was not rampant 30 years ago. Killing classmates. Kids today have no regard for authority or their actions. 
And yes, I blame tv and video. I even blame todays music and radio and their non creative shows on degrading women that have caused our children to become pregnant more prevelant at the alarming percentage in age at around 13. Find me a show that is not sex based and murderous in todays world. No need to name them, im sure there are a few. Reality tv is also the problem....lets see, one guy and 25 women fawning over him as if he were jesus himself. Get a life girls. quit looking for that million dollar payout and take school more serious. But then, I can see there point, if your not effin hot u wont get the job. this is what we tell our children..its all about looks

Title article: War On Earth
Date: 2008-07-13 18:17:29

Again, I havent a clue...six piece...u mean gun? Dude, make yourself clear to the reader...im tired of guessing.

Title article: To Whom It May Concern
Date: 2008-07-13 18:12:21

Thats whats wrong with the world. Spoiled kids who can't be reprimanded. What, you made my kid stay afterschool,,,ill sue.  
 
Officer, my father spanked me for calling that lady fat,,,I want him arrested. In comes social services to the rescue 
 
Get a job? are you kidding me, you cant make me work. 
 
Wow, killing is fun and the guy is a hero, I love video games. 
 
Son, you need to study. Im gonna be an actor or a pro basketball player...they make millions...gonna watch tv instead. 
 
There is nothing new in this paragraph that I can take away.

Title article: The Reluctant Lover
Date: 2008-07-13 17:49:27

45 minutes I would have guessed. Was this the only trailer in the park, and was the dining room table she was chained to made of steel. Oh, and was she mute and brainless. If she just sat on the chair looking at the chain around the leg or whatever all day long and never screaming while the residents of the trailer park were outside walking their dobermans, she must have been blonde. If it was a house with a basement it would be more believeable. This story was just a lil sour lemon.

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I know I'm gonna regret this because one day youre gonna slag off my story.But your comments crack me up.

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