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What Kind Of God?

WHAT KIND OF GOD? By Jon Stalk...
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About Myself: Children of this site... its past your bed time.

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Total number of comments: 142

Title article: Hearts Cry Out
Date: 2008-09-03 13:48:27

This went all over the place...hard to figure out what your saying. lets see...I like it, I like it not,,I like it , I like it not...oops..sorry.

Title article: My Father
Date: 2008-09-03 06:50:35

I have nothing bad to say about this,,,this was touching. But, I think it would have a greater impact if your last line would have been (because you can never die within my mind)...because you say you can never die without me...im left scrathing my head...doesnt make sense unless there is a suicide pact...which we know there isnt.  
 
No one can die if your mind won't allow it.

Title article: Bonnie
Date: 2008-09-03 06:30:40

At least you could have made this into a Haiku. Dude listen, this is between you and your dog, why bore us with it. Don't get me wrong,,,I love animals with the best of them. But who honestly would say (hey man, this was excellent, really showed your creative side) only ass kissers...im not an ass kisser.

Title article: The Thief -- A Haiku
Date: 2008-09-03 06:23:50
ENOUGH
Have come to the conclusion...haiku's are pointless. What can we possible get from this? I looked up best haiku and this is what the japs gave me as there best. 
 
Frog sits on the bank 
Frog jumps in to the water 
water makes ripples 
 
a duh....Brilliant! 
 
Again, whats the point. Is this the best your creative mind can come up with....not you personally.

Title article: No Chivalry
Date: 2008-08-26 12:03:28

We will engrave this poem on your tombstone so through out eternity you can be reminded the coward you are...... 
 
 
Shit, what was that!!! did you hear anything.

Title article: Ode to Chaabuk
Date: 2008-08-26 11:56:45

How can that be fun? Putting syrup on your balls and having the dog go nuts(so to speak) is fun...this doesn't seem like having fun....unless your 4 years old

Title article: "The Lesson"
Date: 2008-08-26 11:53:09

This was awesome, dude, are you that guy. Is this a true story. I would have ended it with the guys talking how they were violated then an order comes in for pervs house and they all fight to take that order to them,,,,now that would be a great way to end it.

Title article: The Chelsea Apartment
Date: 2008-08-26 11:48:15

The stain on the couch, are we sure it was wine. Very Bill Clinton-esk. Catching her man in the act of sex then start raining blows..hmmm, maybe a different way to word that. Cool story though, one of the better ones for me so far today.

Title article: Lemon: a Haiku
Date: 2008-08-26 11:40:00
I think im turning Japanese
Put the pencil down and no one will get hurt. You must promise that you will never do this again. Stick with what you know...iced tea, tequila shots, on fish, ect.......

Title article: Antz
Date: 2008-08-26 11:35:37

ha ha,,laughing at your profile. But you don't scare me..so here goes. Not sure what all the hoopla is all about and the high ratings but this was not (oh my heavens) good. I personally didn't find that funny about the tents,,,kinda dumb really. I think you could write a piece on the headache of ants without the campfires and all....now beetles, thats a different story, they can pitch a tent.

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