Love Crawls Down the Drain

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A Healing

Mathew ignored the horrendous smell, but passed out as...
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About Myself: Children of this site... its past your bed time.

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Total number of comments: 154

Title article: destination's traveling days
Date: 2008-09-16 11:25:01
say what huh
Is unhalo-ed, pastlessness and even ungreat even a word. wouldn't it be the great unknown?...golly I will just say that this poem was really unfabulousness.

Title article: When The Sun Falls
Date: 2008-09-15 19:42:59

This was good. I like the layout of the words. Damn, im not gonna get a credit but I got nothing left to say..wait, just 10 more characters.................... ......no shame.

Title article: Secrets of St. Margaret's
Date: 2008-09-15 19:37:00

This looks interesting but I just dont do chapters. But it does look interesting. Ya know, those catholic girls start much to late.

Title article: May and December
Date: 2008-09-15 19:11:30

Lets get real. What does that mean, he was May, she was December. In all honesty, that doesn't make sense unless you tell us what you mean. Who is older, the man or the woman? I suppose it doesn't matter, though it would be nice to know. Nobody is honest on this site which amuses me. Because this poem really deserves a 3 instead of all the 5's I see.

Title article: Mr. Cook
Date: 2008-09-13 12:57:54

Remind me never to read a story from a kid again...nothing else to say.

Title article: Comforting Memories
Date: 2008-09-13 12:52:06

ok I like this poem. I can only imagine the thought of losing a child. This is very touching though I didn't like the very last line. An airplane just seems out of place...I think I would go with a butterfly or something.

Title article: Disillusionment.
Date: 2008-09-13 12:48:15

Take the subway instead, more crazies for you to feel right at home with. Cookoo..Cookoo

Title article: BAT OUT OF HELL.
Date: 2008-09-13 12:41:25

Think your followers are being to kind. This wasnt bad but it wasnt all that. Weird style and format made it weird to read. This didnt jump out at me like a bat out of hell...hey, that was weird to say of me.

Title article: Ferry Man
Date: 2008-09-13 12:37:41

I think I liked this, not sure fully cause it was kinda hard to follow in a way. Got lost in the beginning but round middle i came around. Yea, not bad, kinda neat. I stamp a low A on it which means you still earn a 5 stars...barely

Title article: Hearts Cry Out
Date: 2008-09-03 13:48:27

This went all over the place...hard to figure out what your saying. lets see...I like it, I like it not,,I like it , I like it not...oops..sorry.

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I know I'm gonna regret this because one day youre gonna slag off my story.But your comments crack me up.

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