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I wrote this poem and had RE Potter look it over. ...

A Toothy Tale

In most issues in life, it is ultimately the heart of...
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About Myself: Children of this site... its past your bed time.

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Total number of comments: 137

Title article: No Chivalry
Date: 2008-08-26 12:03:28

We will engrave this poem on your tombstone so through out eternity you can be reminded the coward you are...... 
 
 
Shit, what was that!!! did you hear anything.

Title article: Ode to Chaabuk
Date: 2008-08-26 11:56:45

How can that be fun? Putting syrup on your balls and having the dog go nuts(so to speak) is fun...this doesn't seem like having fun....unless your 4 years old

Title article: "The Lesson"
Date: 2008-08-26 11:53:09

This was awesome, dude, are you that guy. Is this a true story. I would have ended it with the guys talking how they were violated then an order comes in for pervs house and they all fight to take that order to them,,,,now that would be a great way to end it.

Title article: The Chelsea Apartment
Date: 2008-08-26 11:48:15

The stain on the couch, are we sure it was wine. Very Bill Clinton-esk. Catching her man in the act of sex then start raining blows..hmmm, maybe a different way to word that. Cool story though, one of the better ones for me so far today.

Title article: Lemon: a Haiku
Date: 2008-08-26 11:40:00
I think im turning Japanese
Put the pencil down and no one will get hurt. You must promise that you will never do this again. Stick with what you know...iced tea, tequila shots, on fish, ect.......

Title article: Antz
Date: 2008-08-26 11:35:37

ha ha,,laughing at your profile. But you don't scare me..so here goes. Not sure what all the hoopla is all about and the high ratings but this was not (oh my heavens) good. I personally didn't find that funny about the tents,,,kinda dumb really. I think you could write a piece on the headache of ants without the campfires and all....now beetles, thats a different story, they can pitch a tent.

Title article: Trying to Concentrate on Freedom
Date: 2008-08-26 11:26:57

Oh my God,,that was you guys...... Ok, you put the child in the pic to get the awwwww vote. It worked. I will never understand how we allowed that to happen. ok poem I guess.

Title article: The Sandman
Date: 2008-08-22 11:51:44
be afraid
Thanks for the nightmares ill have now anthler. Metalica rules. 
 
Mommy, antheer is scaring me. 
mommy,,,OH MY GOD SHES DEAD>

Title article: My Present
Date: 2008-08-22 11:47:42

Now we have two for the price of one. Would anyone out there be interested and joining me for a comment? Im usually very sweet and would like if you would help me find even sweeter words to use. ok, Ill give this a passing grade.

Title article: An Unfolding Nightmare
Date: 2008-08-22 11:39:30

r.e.potter, what did your parents ever do to you?

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I know I'm gonna regret this because one day youre gonna slag off my story.But your comments crack me up.

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