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Feb 21, 2007Rotting AwayHorror 3546

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Total number of comments: 35

Title article: KIOWA OIL and GAS (excerpt)
Date: 2008-01-07 12:32:14

Descriptive and good storyline

Title article: Just My Luck
Date: 2008-01-02 00:39:35
sexy?
I think I've seen a scene like that from a late HBO movie. :grin

Title article: Lessons
Date: 2008-01-02 00:33:46

Good story! Very meaningful

Title article: 12 Years
Date: 2008-01-01 18:04:09
very good
so sad...

Title article: Humans Can Lick, Too
Date: 2007-10-25 08:32:14
Dark figure
It was a good story. Short and sweet 8) Maybe it would have been better to leave out the dark figure wishing to get into the house. It kinda gives away the ending of story.

Title article: Gloomy Sunday
Date: 2007-10-17 21:37:39
last sentence?
the man fell asleep and never woke up? why is that funny? something i am missing? :?  
 
this is a very depressing story. I liked that you ended the story without the cheesy "everything turns out great" ending.

Title article: I Tried...
Date: 2007-10-17 21:22:14
Bleeding ears every night?
No wonder her husband wanted her dead :grin

Title article: One Day In November
Date: 2007-10-08 12:54:08

Yeah.. definitely not a romance story

Title article: MY SECRET FRIEND
Date: 2007-10-05 23:20:17
John-
I think you can edit your story by resubmitting it with the word "EDITED:" in front of your title.

Title article: Rotting Away
Date: 2007-07-06 16:16:59
Thanks for the comments
Points taken... Thanks for your feedback. I am thinking about writing another scifi story. I have the idea worked out, but it's hard to express it in words.

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11/16/2007 20:37:38Re:Backwards thinkingOff-Topic777
11/03/2007 17:43:16Re:Hey!Off-Topic1077

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J. Grimm (J. Grimm)

 Created On: 02/25/2008 01:42:49
Hey. What's the deal? I just read your story along with all of the comments and I'm curious as to why you haven't published anymore.

I thought it was a neat little story. It was fun to read.

Who gives a shit what others say about "story structure" and crap like that?! Those are just pompous assholes who hope other people will find them intelligent by using phrases like that.

What you did was give us a brief look into the mind of a man who died and doesn't know it. BAM! It's that simple! If the pompous assholes discouraged you, shame on you! Keep pushing on. I've read countless stories on this site... some by the very people who criticize and even they put out a number of stinkers.

I'd like to see you post more just to see how you've progressed in your story telling abilities.

KEEP ON WRITING!
Elephant (Yahaira Nunez)
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Edited By Elephant (Yahaira Nunez) On: 10/16/2007 14:35:46
I hope you've gotten a chance to read the last part to Tomo's Guns.

Take care.
Feedback from Tommy Lee (Yfcomp): I sure did! That was great.

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