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Member Since	03/19/2008
Last Online	10/07/2008
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Website/Blog:	bomboob.com
About Myself:	timidy comada moda shimoda... philophil my loffel.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 26, 2008	The Cosmonaut Avenger	Miscellaneous Stories	193
Sep 3, 2008	Girls Just Wanna Have Fun Chapter Deuce 1/2	Romance	231
Jul 13, 2008	The Lord and The Pink Skunk 3 Chapter Nuevo Revelations	Adventure	331
Jul 4, 2008	Girls Just Wanna have fun	Non-Fiction	229
Jun 25, 2008	The exotic tales of a pink skunk and a cucumber, Chapter 76	Romance	357
Jun 18, 2008	A Pink Skunk and His Lord, Chapter 36	Adventure	181
Jun 15, 2008	The Moon is My Pet and My Lover	Mystery	213
Apr 25, 2008	Adventures of Undead Daddy	Adventure	312
Apr 10, 2008	The Birth and Death of a Gang(ster)(s)	Romance	477

Comments

Title article: The Undreadful Monday
Date: 2008-08-07 18:03:03

ps
not sure on who to vote for this coming election? vote obama... the historical weight alone is enough... and he couldnt be worst than busch... and if you dont youre a racist.. plain and simple... and dont try to deny it, you racist...

Title article: The Undreadful Monday
Date: 2008-08-07 17:57:28

eh.. mehhaa!
not bad not bad.. WAS this true? seemed like more loosely true then hard true... like conflicting stuff... if this girl was such a genius and everybody knew she was gonna get it right, why was the priest always winning? why doesnt she just go every time? answer me that miss smarty priest?... and another note... did anybody else think there was gonna be a raping in this story? Like the loser of stumped the priest.. well never mind... but anyways.. in retrospect you gotta admit this is a cool priest... no raping, eats doughnuts and pizza he stole from teenage hoodlums... and he speaks the truth.. your damned if you do your damned if you dont.. this years preliminararies was the first time to vote for me.. we went to the our schools gym to vote... but left after the old people in front of us took too long to fill out their forms... not blaming the old people for my damnation either, I just didnt wanna wait and fill out forms. im going to hell, and im fine with that. i like this priest

Title article: TALK: OWN DIMENSION
Date: 2008-07-18 17:22:38

hmm
i liked the whole premace.. or whatever.. but at the end.. its like some random guy with kahkies and a dress shirt just walked out of nowhere and started to explain how we should act to one another.. you knwo what i mean. its a good message and all.. like.. i dont know if id call it judging but rather observing.. like a guy walks past me with a big nose.. i say hey that guys got a big nose.. maybe hes jewish.. i dont say.. wow look at that fatty fat nose.. he looks so stupid with that fat nose.. i bet hes stupid too! but fashion is a whole nother story.. like some people i can just see and the first thing that pops into my head is.. tool.. or.. hippy, wankster and so on.. and these are much more accurate then actual natual appearences.. know wha mean? cause like its pretty much them wanting you to think a certain way of them.. and so we, or I do. know wha mean? koolio

Title article: The End of the Beginning, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-07-16 20:55:19

hummum
not as good as the first... not sure what this one was really about... i caught some hint of titanic in here.. but i dont see what any of that has to do with the end of the world.. or that big sun picture you had in the first one.. cmon now where are the aliens and the lasers and the forbidden love of sexy aliens

Title article: The End of the Beginning, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-16 20:51:38

humm
the descriptions were good.. tho interspecies eloping isn't really my thing.. the structure and stuff was kind of gritty too.. i guess alot of it is my personal taste

Title article: The Last Supper?
Date: 2008-07-15 20:54:07

well i dont know
so who did they kill and eat.. that guys wife.. or.. i skimmed.. so.. i dont know

Title article: Imagination Encircles The World
Date: 2008-07-14 17:38:07

damn you lemon
but ye ye ye it was pretty good i enjoyed your prescriptions, but im not too shore on the music... well actually the music was pretty good.. ill give you kudos

Title article: The Lord and The Pink Skunk 3 Chapter Nuevo Revelations
Date: 2008-07-13 19:26:15

and ps
dankeshane relic

Title article: The One
Date: 2008-07-13 19:21:50

freedomfighter
what message? the message that... huh...nope still dotn get it.. this just made me sad in the tummy :(.. i would have ended it with... fear of rejection HAS NOT won once more...

Title article: The People From The Sky I: Man On The Moon
Date: 2008-07-13 19:07:18

dang
this sounds like a pretty good story.. from the comments.. i just wish i wasnt such a lazy mother... have summary of it on the second part and the second part not as long

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Christian Wright (The 13th) hell	Created On: 07/09/2008 05:02:59 Edited By Christian Wright (The 13th) On: 07/30/2008 12:52:48 I'm in a better mood now.
Roby Thomas (Roby) St. Clair Shores, MI	Created On: 07/08/2008 05:47:02 I don't mind the bad review, it's just stepping stones to making a better story. However, sounds like you know from experience about pills.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) I DONT KNOW!!!	Created On: 07/04/2008 01:08:06 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/04/2008 01:09:25 at least your head doesnt hurt... Your stories are truely inspiring and deserve every reward possible.
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire	Created On: 07/04/2008 00:37:48 I'll be a liitle more polite. Good morning...... Phil
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