A Date with Priya

It was a typical winter evening in Kolkata. Velvety...

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About Myself: I'm thirteen, to be fourteen in November. I read, write, sing and play violin. I love all the Sherlock Holmes cases, Jane Eyre, Little Women, The Count of Monte Cristo,all horror stories, books by Christopher Pike and mysteries. I listen to The Beatles mostly, but some Panic at the Disco and Billy Talent. That's about it! Bye!

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Aug 1, 2008An Emily Heckott Mystery: The Sticky-Note Murder, Chapter 1Mystery 79
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Total number of comments: 24

Title article: Hitchhiking
Date: 2008-08-21 18:24:02
Holy crow-bird
Know when you're reading a really good story or watching a movie and realize you've been holding your breath? Starting with '"Oh shit"' and ending with 'And then the lizard/criminal devoured the troublemaker whole.' I'm pretty sure I wasn't breathing. I'm also sure that that means even in writers block you can write extremely well!

Title article: An Emily Heckott Mystery: The Sticky-Note Murder, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-10 19:20:17

Thanks for your comments, chaabuk and lemon. Hopefully I'll get around to writing more, but I still don't know what's gonna happen next. Lemon, sorry you couldn't make it all the way through. It's not surprising I sound childish, I still am one. Maybe as I get older my writing will mature. Thanks for trying!

Title article: 1961
Date: 2008-08-01 01:37:17

Holy cow! That was really shocking and really sad at the same time. It kept me totally interested in the story the whole time. The ending was really unexpected. The whole thing was really well written. Good Job!

Title article: The Last Words
Date: 2008-07-09 17:44:54

Good story. It made me think. I once read that the whole Judas' betrayal to Jesus was all pre-planned. Like Jesus knew one had to betray him so to fulfill the prophecy. Judas was really the beloved desciple and Jesus entrusted him with the most important and difficult job. Kind of like how Snape ended up being good all along and Dumbledore knew he had to die and trusted Snape to kill him.  
Yeah, I know, the whole things pretty blasphemous, especially coming from a Roman Catholic like myself. Oh well, I'd rather think of it in this way instead of Judas cold-heartedly betraying the saviour. Wouldn't you?

Title article: The Search
Date: 2008-07-09 16:49:03
To Loris
I edited it a bit, hopefully the paragraphing will be better. I never was very good at it. Thanks for posting!

Title article: Sunshine
Date: 2008-02-23 19:09:06

I was sniffling and wiping away tears the whole time I was reading this! Aw, such a sweet story!

Title article: Deadly Music
Date: 2008-01-09 22:25:26
Holy cow
I think out of all the stories I've read on this site this has to be one of my favourites. It may be because I already do play the violin or because you are an excellent writer. I am leaning on the latter. Wow, good job! Keep writing!

Title article: DOG
Date: 2007-12-31 20:22:10
My ending
I think George walked around until he was picked up by a kind hearted old woman and taken home. He got home to find his mother a broken alcoholic but as soon as she saw him she vowed to never drink again and ran to embrace him. He grew up and wrote a book about his childhood (which became a best seller) and everything was all right! 
Oh, and he saw Billy again and in the end stopped him from commiting suicide. 
Yes, I know. I like happy endings. 
 
Good story!

Title article: Dirk Spencer - Jerk Extraordinaire
Date: 2007-12-29 01:50:09

Haha, serves him right, the big jerk! Great story!

Title article: The Chat from Hell
Date: 2007-12-29 01:36:07
Thanks.
Gee, thanks. Sitting here alone, at night reading about a creepy murderer that's killing people. I feel a lot better now. :p Haha. Still a great story! Good job!

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