There Is Only One Star, Chapter 5

THE BEGINNING The year of reflecting...

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Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3)
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About Myself: I have 3 things that mean the world to me, my little family, my faith, and my fishing pole. I'm not a great fisherman, but it's good to get out. All other things pretty much confuse me in life. Somethings I just don't get. But by sticking to those 3 things that are simple and wonderful, life is good. I like wholesome writing, however, I do stray from that at times. I guess it's from to much t.v.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 22, 2008Thump-thumpHorror 467
Apr 16, 2008An Ode To WhiskeyPoetry 164
Apr 13, 2008The CoastAdventure 186
Apr 12, 2008July 2nd, 1863Poetry 140
Apr 8, 2008The MountPoetry 136
Apr 6, 2008Time MachineRomance 490
Apr 2, 2008The ReturnMiscellaneous Stories 159
Apr 2, 2008The Monk, His Apples, a Hound, and The Lost Treasure of John CarterMiscellaneous Stories 197

Comments

Title article: Run Away
Date: 2008-04-22 17:02:00

A very much needed message today! To many of us fold like cheap suits today and lose sight of goals when work is involved, or when they feel or think differently then others.

Title article: Distress
Date: 2008-04-22 16:49:11

Very strong words. Although I don't agree with some of it, the intent of the poem is understood. Good writing.

Title article: Descent Into Madness
Date: 2008-04-22 06:53:13

Now that was good!

Title article: The Die Is Cast, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-04-22 06:48:13

Good description, however not quite sure where this is going. It seemed as if this was only the middle of a story without the beginning or an end. I'd love to see it expanded maybe?

Title article: Under the Cherry Blossoms
Date: 2008-04-22 06:42:26

I liked the description of not being able to breath. I was a bit confused though as to whom the voice belonged to? I'm not quite sure who buried this person either. However, this did give me the chills. I couldn't imagine a fate worse than being buried alive! Yikes!

Title article: Thump-thump
Date: 2008-04-22 04:23:03

OK...This would be my attempt at horror.

Title article: Tricky Old Women
Date: 2008-04-18 17:03:19

I kind of understnad the intent, but not the means by which it was acheived. I was half expecting her to jump in front of the train rather than steal his wallet from the sad tone. The first paragraph seemed to be a bit choppy, or jumbled. By "minus" I believe you meant "might as"? All in all a nice lttle tale, although a touch to cynical.

Title article: An Ode To Whiskey
Date: 2008-04-16 11:59:46

Advice and point taken! Does sound bizzare. That part is now edited. Thanks.

Title article: You Create
Date: 2008-04-16 03:55:56

Sadly, a plague with no solution in sight. Well spoken Sorrow.

Title article: Nothing
Date: 2008-04-16 03:49:54

I'm really down after reading this. Written well, but very depressing.

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04/04/2008 08:38:02Re:I'm A Stranger Here MyselfOff-Topic1348

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Brooke (SageSyren)

 Created On: 04/17/2008 08:11:46
Thanks for signing my guestbook, for reading one of my stories and for asking for a conection. Whew that was a mouth full to type hahaha.
So I thought I'd do the same
See ya around.
Syren
Christian Wright (The 13th)

Wicklow
 Created On: 04/14/2008 12:39:01
Edited By Christian wright (thirteen) On: 04/14/2008 12:39:52
Brought here by the shamrock.Do you have a bit of the irish in you.I was in the neighbourhood and thought i would say hi.I even brought the guiness but no-ones home.More for me so
Enjoyed your stories and Goodluck.

Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)

New Braunfels, TX
 Created On: 04/04/2008 08:40:14
Wouldn't that make 4 things? Or do I not know how to count?
Feedback from Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3): He, he...you are correct. I must of had mittens on and couldn't see my fingers. By 3 things I meant my family, faith, and fishing pole. Thanks!

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