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I Will Lay In Vain

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Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp)
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Last Online 09/07/2008
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About Myself: I'm a 22 year old guy from Montreal, Quebec. Just love reading and writing. :)
I'm currently studying languages (Spanish and German) but I've just been accepted in Litterature at the UQAM here in Montreal. Plan on working in the book industry.

Feel free to comment, good or bad I don't mind (one needs to be open to critique) and thank you for reading what I enjoyed writing!

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Title article: Awake Now
Date: 2008-04-17 17:11:31
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Nice poem, but I think that you should write it in a paragraph instead, the lines just break the pace in my opinion. But free verses are what you want them to be so don't listen to me at all buddy! ;)

Title article: The Bathroom Bandit
Date: 2008-04-17 17:08:35
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Hehe not bad, but don't mention what's based on real events or not, it's not like we know you personnaly but you don't want people making fun of you forever and ever and ever! ;) 
 
I would just suggest re-editing it and justify the text, it makes it way easier to read and keep up. Good job nonethless!

Title article: So there I was 1...
Date: 2008-04-17 15:50:33
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Hahaha omg that is so wicked that we got the same idea without ever realizing it! :D 
 
Like you said man, great minds think alike! Cheers! Enjoyed the story a lot, simple and true! :)

Title article: The Last Hero
Date: 2008-04-09 06:18:44
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Not bad, was kinda expecting it, nice storytelling though. :)

Title article: Stitches
Date: 2008-04-04 21:25:31
Woah
That was emotionaly charged... I... I just kinda feel it, since you know, been there, done that over the years. Really like the two verses per strophe, it gave it a voice. Good stuff!

Title article: World Wide Web Cam
Date: 2008-04-02 16:51:24
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Woah... Wasn't expecting this one, I'd totally freak out and shoot myself being in Andrew's shoes and watching my girl getting raped/killed/abducted in front of my very eyes and being unable to help her. 
 
By the Man known as Jesus... You have wicked thoughts mister Neve!

Title article: Two + Two= 5
Date: 2008-04-01 10:34:39
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Cool read, enjoyed it and the ending surprised me a bit. You had the courage to make her pull out and be reasonable at the end, something which I simply couldn't do in the story The Appointment. ;) Good job!

Title article: Brown Goo
Date: 2008-03-31 21:36:05
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Very interesting, I liked the idea and the sincerity of the characters. And damn Melanie's like my girlfriend... Always know how to get whatever it is she wants, no matter what... Damn us guys can be so whipped sometimes! ;)

Title article: This is art part 1
Date: 2008-03-29 11:24:01
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Yeah gotta agree with the others fellows that commented. Put this in paragraphs, vary a bit the names. The idea is good, but develop it further with part 2 ;) 
 
This is like Jackson Pollock meets Freddy Krugger! Gotta recognize it as art some way or the other!

Title article: Heaven? Hell?
Date: 2008-03-28 10:51:44
:)
Wasn't expecting this turn of event, that narration of yours kept me expecting something, but the ending was just great, what indeed can a ghost do to kill some time? I just smiled, awesome Mister Neve! Where in hell do you get all those crazy ideas? Hehe

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