Leaving

Leaving Fall has always been my...

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Chapter 1 The year was 2003, the country was killing...
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Website/Blog: www.storywrite.com/SageSyren
About Myself: Also try http://thefourbreazeales.blogspot.com/ This is my family website.

I was gone, now I'm back. Decided I liked this place and missed it.

I'm a hearth and nature witch. I love to laugh and have fun.

All comment are welcome and any help you can give in puncation and dialogue tags would be greatly appreciated.

For the future....thanks

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Title article: Panties: A Romance Ruined
Date: 2008-04-23 10:08:24
Hahahaha
I laughed so hard through the whole thing and I don't think I was suppose to. *blushes* Very funny

Title article: never
Date: 2008-04-22 09:24:57

Doesn't sound like a dog to me. If it was a dog wouldn't they have put fur and not hair.  
 
Sounds like a tragic accident happened and they lost someone they loved. 
 
Nice start. Would love to hear what happened before this part.

Title article: Im In Love with My BestFriend
Date: 2008-04-21 13:14:29

Those are the best. Friends first, lovers second. Today most of us do things backwards. *sighs* I had a friend like this. Wonder what he is doing today?

Title article: Nightmare
Date: 2008-04-21 13:00:42

You need to continue with this. It's a really good start. Am curious to find at what Michael is.

Title article: Fancy Fantasy
Date: 2008-04-21 12:44:24

Even being married I still feel like this lot of the time.  
Sorry this happened to you. Made for a great short story though.

Title article: Grotesque
Date: 2008-04-21 12:30:05

This was really good, but I wonder if there could have been more showing instead of telling.

Title article: Sword of Olivia
Date: 2008-04-21 11:57:38
I agree
I agree with Scott. This should be longer. I love mythology.

Title article: Something Spicy
Date: 2008-04-21 11:46:07

I couldn't stop laughing. You got more like this? :)

Title article: My hell
Date: 2008-04-21 11:39:35

Very descriptive. I loved it. My only suggestion would be to break up the long paragraph into smaller one. :)

Title article: Christmas of the Dead
Date: 2008-04-21 11:30:33

*shivers* I will never be able to remember christmas the same way again. :) Great job

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