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About Myself:

I have seen a lot in life from birth till death of my loved ones. Most of the stories I write is just to get things off my chest.

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
May 19, 2008	I am not Drunk	Miscellaneous Stories	127

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Total number of comments: 23

Title article: to say goodbye
Date: 2008-12-28 17:43:47

goodbye
if you know that person is safe elsewhere . goodbye shouldnt be hard but when you know that you wont see that person forever . its a killer ..

Title article: Falling
Date: 2008-12-28 17:40:27

nice
why do women have to suffer . why cant men jump . and no daddy saving them plz . make sure they do fall .heheh .... good one .... its true this does happen

Title article: the destiny of the rose
Date: 2008-11-20 15:56:11

the door opened . i punched him hard on the face . i shook my hands . gave the rose to him and told him to pass it to his mum ..... hahah . this would have been more fun . well done though

Title article: Dominate the House
Date: 2008-11-20 15:52:16

I didn't know what was happening . the use of different name was funny . but thats all .. and yap teh silly singing .. couldnt get the head or the tail of the whole thingy.

Title article: Hold
Date: 2008-11-18 19:22:54

good and bad . yeap definitly change the font .... this looks so cheap . good in a sense .. things are in details . bad in sense . too much dailogue

Title article: MERCY
Date: 2008-11-18 19:18:15

well done . got bit lost . had to raed twice as to get what was happening . well done though ... ta

Title article: Invasion©- chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-10 16:20:43

it was amazing . liek watching a movie ...... looking forward to some other parts of it . as what happens in Brisbane . hope not Australia ..... good work .... i though a tsunami or something coming ...... but UFO is even better

Title article: café light
Date: 2008-11-05 18:32:54

Nice
Good things happen to good people . so why cry over the spilt milk ..... a friend is not friend and a husband is not a husband if they cannot tell you the truth ..... its best for you to be without them . live life as if it were your last . dont cry over things you cannot get ... ta

Title article: Hearts are often broken by words left unspoken.
Date: 2008-11-05 18:22:18

mmm!!!!!!
The dream portion was confusing .... thought she dumped the slacko ..... but later realised she was just thinking .... should have tried harder to put teh point across . things happen for a reason . people meet for a reason . we fall in love for a reason .. grap each moment . dont look back to regreat . never leave things for tomorrow as there is no tomorrow

Title article: The Smell
Date: 2008-11-05 18:18:51

try and try harder
the starting was good ... there was bit if excitment but the ending was a bore ...... should have done another version of it .... like a part 2 ... telling they kep meeting ..... or the boy started stepping on her feet .. should have let teh romance grow before puitting an end to it ... i didn't like it as the guy disapperers for no reson

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