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Patrick O. (Roadkill315)
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Member Since 01/07/2008
Last Online 07/04/2008
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About Myself: My interests are my marriage, our 4 kids, writing, fishing, golf, nascar, fantasy sports, chess, travel, my hot sauce collection now at 255 bottles and growing, and food that is very hot and spicy enjoyed with cold Labatts.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 10, 2008Alternative Gaye CallingMiscellaneous Stories 246
Apr 3, 2008Rouge's Realm Revealed (Chapter One)Science Fiction 215
Apr 2, 2008Manifest ThirstAdventure 476

Comments

Title article: Peacefully smile.
Date: 2008-04-12 06:25:37

Pleasant poem, good one to start the day with.

Title article: Christmas of the Dead
Date: 2008-04-12 06:22:09

That was a good read. Lots of bodies and excitement.

Title article: In The Desert
Date: 2008-04-10 15:53:09

The comments were almost as good as the story, almost... good it all was

Title article: All Must Fall
Date: 2008-04-10 15:51:16

Created God, hhmmm... thats an interesting topic for great debate. You made an interesting short out of it for sure. In the end, time must end, so time wins, in the end. Excellent.

Title article: Full Circle
Date: 2008-04-10 15:48:02

Neat perspective for this one, is this our future?

Title article: The prostitute
Date: 2008-04-10 15:44:45

I found this balanced, a pleasant read... “Don’t you want to have sex with me?” ... now if I had a quarter for everytime I've been asked that, well, a gum ball I'd have right now I would

Title article: The Girl In The Blue Dress
Date: 2008-04-10 15:40:35

Nice exchange between characters... The ending was certainly worth the time to read.

Title article: The Politician
Date: 2008-04-10 15:38:48

Very nice. I'll share it with some political junky friends of mine; tell then this dude Nate Stanford captured what we debate for hours into a poem. Now, can you write one that captures the essence of what the winner does with his time during those next four years?

Title article: One cut too many
Date: 2008-04-10 15:34:08

trying to end my day on a high note, and I read this. I'll take my high from acknowledging that you have poetic talent.

Title article: THE EMPTY CHAIR
Date: 2008-04-10 15:32:18

heart string plucker this one is, gotta go home and hug my girl now.

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R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter)
This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it 		Created On: 04/14/2008 21:44:54
enjoy reading your work.

Christian Wright (FRANTIC)

Dublin Land
 Created On: 04/14/2008 11:41:52
Like the new profile pic.
Keep writing and goodluck.
Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3)

The Garden State
 Created On: 04/04/2008 14:48:35
Hi, Thanks for commenting on both of my stories, I really do appreciate the feed back! Just hopping around to introduce myself. There is a ton of stuff on this site.
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)

New Braunfels, TX
 Created On: 04/04/2008 10:15:03
Just stopping by to say I am glad that you are joining in a lot more lately...
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 03/13/2008 20:40:25
Don't know if you write any, but I catch your comments around on other people stories and they're usually pretty good.
I'd like to see a story or something of yours.
Feedback from Patrick O. (Roadkill315): HI, thanks for the note in my guestbook, I have recently posted a couple of stories, would love your review. Thanks

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