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The People From The Sky I: Man On The Moon

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Patrick O. (Roadkill315)
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Member Since 01/07/2008
Last Online 07/04/2008
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About Myself: My interests are my marriage, our 4 kids, writing, fishing, golf, nascar, fantasy sports, chess, travel, my hot sauce collection now at 255 bottles and growing, and food that is very hot and spicy enjoyed with cold Labatts.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 10, 2008Alternative Gaye CallingMiscellaneous Stories 185
Apr 3, 2008Rouge's Realm Revealed (Chapter One)Science Fiction 170
Apr 2, 2008Manifest ThirstAdventure 424

Comments

Total number of comments: 256

Title article: Perfect Match
Date: 2008-04-27 06:51:51

Some good humor work on the site lately, this is another good one. Thanks for the morning chuckle

Title article: Whirling Slumber
Date: 2008-04-27 06:13:47

Very interesting read. Great story telling, not a sex piece I thought it would be. That kept me hooled throughout and it was refeshing to not have a hard scene in it.

Title article: The Adventures of Literal Man!
Date: 2008-04-27 06:09:20

Not just funny, hilarious. ANd the best part was a well constructed ending to it which is often the hardest part of humor, at least for me. Nice!

Title article: A Dreaming Pet
Date: 2008-04-27 05:57:55

So pet is not really a pet animal right? That would be wierd, wrong. Flow is what I noticed a bit off here. Acts end abrupt and next we cover emotion where acts are presumed to be finished but would have been better told through to completion I believe.

Title article: YOUR LOVE
Date: 2008-04-24 13:54:47

Sounds like opportunity lost, nice work conveying the thought

Title article: Panties: A Romance Ruined
Date: 2008-04-23 11:50:17

wedgie poem, a first for me.

Title article: Procrastinator
Date: 2008-04-23 10:32:04

Wait, I heard the Procrastinator's Anonymous meeting has been canceled, how does this disease ever end then?

Title article: Remembering Mom
Date: 2008-04-23 10:29:38

Very moving, very well done. Bravo!

Title article: The Death For Love
Date: 2008-04-23 09:33:52

More a framework for a story perhaps? If not, too short and fragmented to be considered good work. Build it into a short story of 300-600 words and I bet you'll have a hit.

Title article: Revenge
Date: 2008-04-23 06:57:10

Wow, one huge block paragraph. Or were the dashed lines supposed to be paragraph breaks? Either way, it made it hard to read through. Started slow but did pick up nicely. Wouldn't mind re-reading it if reformatted.

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03/29/2008 18:17:30Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic37106
04/03/2008 10:32:38Re:AhahahaOff-Topic10867
04/03/2008 08:02:46Re:AhahahaOff-Topic10867
04/03/2008 06:50:26Re:AhahahaOff-Topic10867
04/05/2008 19:04:57Re:The 13th.Off-Topic7839
04/03/2008 18:32:42Re:The 13th.Off-Topic7839
04/05/2008 19:57:50Re:The score to your short stories?Off-Topic2231
04/05/2008 19:21:07Re:The score to your short stories?Off-Topic2231
04/02/2008 12:33:03Re:The score to your short stories?Off-Topic2231
04/05/2008 19:17:08Re:Best War Novel?Off-Topic1567

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R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter)
This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it 		Created On: 04/14/2008 19:44:54
enjoy reading your work.

Christian Wright (The 13th)

Dublin Land
 Created On: 04/14/2008 09:41:52
Like the new profile pic.
Keep writing and goodluck.
Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3)

The Garden State
 Created On: 04/04/2008 12:48:35
Hi, Thanks for commenting on both of my stories, I really do appreciate the feed back! Just hopping around to introduce myself. There is a ton of stuff on this site.
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)

New Braunfels, TX
 Created On: 04/04/2008 08:15:03
Just stopping by to say I am glad that you are joining in a lot more lately...
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 03/13/2008 18:40:25
Don't know if you write any, but I catch your comments around on other people stories and they're usually pretty good.
I'd like to see a story or something of yours.
Feedback from Patrick O. (Roadkill315): HI, thanks for the note in my guestbook, I have recently posted a couple of stories, would love your review. Thanks

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