Elijah

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Cody OBryant (Lifeless)
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Member Since 05/10/2008
Last Online 11/03/2008
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Website/Blog: myspace.com/lost_my_rhythm
About Myself: Names Cody and I hail from Plano, Texas.
I'm Sixteen, and am a Junior at Plano East Senior High. I haven't been writing as much as I'd like (tanks to band demanding every hour of my life), but now that football season has practically ended, I should be posting a lot more.
I just finished my Hiatus '08 which consisted of summer vacation, and an ideas building period.
Also, because I believe that if you don't do something right, you need to do it again, I will be pulling stories to fix them, and then I will re-submit them.
A few things about my writing:
I'm a grammar Nazi as my English teachers say, so I get really aggravated when I see miss used ppunctuation.
My genre is Horror (more suspense than gore), but I've branched out into poetry, but even my poems are sort of dark...
My favorite authors are Mr. Stephen King, Mr. Dean Koontz, and Mr. John Saul.
That's all for now!

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jun 2, 2008RunHorror 223
May 10, 2008Khalahua Chronicles: pt.1: Welcome to KhalahuaHorror 165
May 29, 2008Khalahua Chronicles: pt2 : The History of DeathHorror 144
Oct 28, 2008ScarsPoetry 97
Oct 30, 2008The ReturnHorror 91

Comments

Total number of comments: 41

Title article: Halloween, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-11-01 09:47:06
Great!!!
Love it all!!! 
Why else would one go to Vegas than to kill a bunch of people? 
And I love the internet bunny suit, almost like me and my roah suit!!! 
 
Funny as hell!!!

Title article: Halloween, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-01 09:38:00
!!!
oh my God, I broke out laughing at the Swiss army knife thing, that was great! This story is too funny, makes me wonder why it's categorized as Horror instead of Humor... 
 
Good job!!!

Title article: Halloween, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-11-01 09:29:41
Nice
Loved it, and am going to keep on reading all the chaps til the end! 
Love the whole Storiesville conspiracy thing, and I'm glad I check my private messages in my e-mail account :D 
 
Great job!

Title article: The shadow hunters, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-11-01 09:21:52
Interesting
I really liked the beginning; the descriptions were good. I actually thought this one was better than the best chapter, but I thought the ending was not as strong as it should be. The caring shadow just sort of came out of no where based on the descriptions of it ready to kill previous to it. 
But overall it was god. 
 
Keep up the good work! 
4/5

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-10-31 23:40:14
All's well that ends well???
Nah!!! Never in Horror!!! 
This was Phenomenal!!! I loved the ending, and he change of pace from chapter 6 to here...wow! I honestly had no idea that the plague (if you don't mind me calling it that for want of a better word) would spread that fast. 
In my honest opinion, I feel you should continue; build up an the maggot-thing family. What are they, where did they come from, what is their purpose? 
But it is your choice, so in the end, whatever you decide, and whenever you decide it, I will support the ruling. 
 
Here's to a GREAT piece of literature!!! 
 
5/5

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-10-31 23:30:28
sigh...
Well, I was eating, but now... eh, I think I'll take a break... 
Overall, you did a great job as usually, and I cannot wait to move on to the next chapter (if it is the final one, I will be sad, but I know it will be epic! 
 
Well, here I go... 
5/5

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-10-31 23:22:54
Once again..
Great Job! 
Now I cannot stop reading even though I want to go to bed, I just have to know what happens!!! (And that is the sign of good writing and excellent cliffhangers!!!) 
 
5/5

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-31 23:10:55
Do I have to say anything?
If for some reason i wasn't already hooked on this, there's no reason I shouldn't be now. Your capturing of the human mind in stressful environments was spot on, and the ending did what good ending should do: leave me wanting more. 
 
Keep it up! 
5/5

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-10-31 23:05:20
!!!
Here we have yet another EPIC WIN!!! 
Once more, the descriptions are phenomenal, "Feeling as if he had been kicked in the testicles with a steel-toed boot, Samuel clenched his teeth and keeled over in pain." I feel his pain, man, great way to hrase that! 
 
On to da next! 
5/5

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-31 22:53:36
!!!
Great Job man!!! 
They just keep getting better and better with eat chapter! 
The descriptions are great, and the twisted-ness (If I may use what my dictionary says isn't a word) is outstanding!!! 
 
Off to the next one! 
5/5

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