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JJ Tyler (JJtyler)
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Member Since 02/16/2008
Last Online 09/04/2008
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Website/Blog: www.justyler.blogspot.com
About Myself: "Someplace, in the grand scheme of things, this world must touch the other,"
-Cormac McCarthy.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 21, 2008Stay BackNon-Fiction 86
Aug 15, 2008TedMiscellaneous Stories 85
Aug 11, 2008Men and FishHumor 116
Aug 2, 2008As We Know ItScience Fiction 316

Comments

Title article: Under The Stars.
Date: 2008-07-20 15:36:48

I always try to post a good comment on yours because you demand it on your profile.  
 
This was a story that is singular. That's all I can say and all that needs to be said.  
 
There's nothing else like it here on Storieville. Good job.

Title article: Unavoidable Detours Created By The Elderly.
Date: 2008-07-14 22:33:41

You're like an scene photographer. You take a scene that is meaningful in it's own way and take a snap shot of it, and it turns out to be a good look into someone's life.  
 
There's a realism in your stories.  
 
Just the other day I had an old timer asking me why I used a debit card to buy my diet mountain dew at the Exxon. Just came out and asked it.  
 
Thanks for the story, keep writing.

Title article: A Dollar Seventy-Five and a Hot Dog
Date: 2008-07-14 22:22:25
Great
This was hilarious. You captured a mood and a character extremely well, and kept it moving.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: Conversations, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-14 21:03:32

Dialogue is one of the toughest things to write, I think, so I think it's great to hammer out pieces with nothing but. 
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: manchurian candies premonitions, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-07-14 21:01:10
Different
This is different, and sometimes different is really good and sometimes it is really bad.  
 
I can't figure out which this is.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: Unconscious Revenge
Date: 2008-07-14 20:58:13

I agree with Dark Romance, this seemed to be someone's fantasy and not really a story for someone else to read.  
 
In other words, I feel like Paolo the "Chinese Eyed" guy.

Title article: The Letter
Date: 2008-07-14 20:54:06
Well done
There was no filler in this, and it had a great rhythm to it, especially the first half.  
 
It felt real while reading it, and that's a great thing.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: kiss of betray
Date: 2008-07-14 20:48:06

I think the sentiment and the passion of a love lost was here, but the execution was off.  
 
You mentioned that English is your second language (in the comments), and for that reason alone you should be commended, as you write better than a good chunk of us who have been writing and speaking it our entire lives.

Title article: The Rainy Day Man
Date: 2008-07-14 20:44:34

Little Abner had a character who always walked around with a cloud over his or her head, and this is very symbolic of depression, bad luck, a negative outlook.  
 
It's good to see two people with the similar circumstances can hook up. Opposites don't always attract.  
 
Keep writing and good luck.

Title article: The Love That Was Never To Have Been
Date: 2008-07-14 20:40:16

If I had any advice, it would be about showing and not telling. Most of this story is explaining the backdrop, except for the dialogue. Telling us what's happening is not the same as creating a place where we can watch it happen.  
 
But, what do I know? 
 
Keep writing and good luck.

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05/28/2008 21:55:53Re:Hello, I have an important questionOff-Topic363
05/25/2008 08:17:32Re:Favorite AuthorOff-Topic3771
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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 07/30/2008 23:55:51
I'm really enjoying 'The Boy and the Buffalo' - thought it was time I signed in.

Phil
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 05/26/2008 18:53:11
I read your blog.
I hope you realize that the Lakers will eat the flesh of the Spurs.
Ginobli is your only real hope. Duncan isn't being as dominant as he should, and Ginobli (even though I respect the guy), pulled some lucky shots that drove momentum for them in Game 3.

Enjoy the last few games of your season, fan of the Spurs.

From LA,
-CS.
Feedback from JJ Tyler (JJtyler): Your prophecy was correct! Although the Lakers didn't fare to well in the next round.

We'll see what happens in an odd year.

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