Awakening of Minds (Part One)

So there I was, looking once more at the device on the...

From Stagnant Water

The rain had finally stopped. After two days of...
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Website/Blog: www.justyler.blogspot.com
About Myself: "Someplace, in the grand scheme of things, this world must touch the other,"
-Cormac McCarthy.

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Aug 21, 2008Stay BackNon-Fiction 78
Aug 15, 2008TedMiscellaneous Stories 80
Aug 11, 2008Men and FishHumor 108
Aug 2, 2008As We Know ItScience Fiction 312

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Total number of comments: 128

Title article: Ted
Date: 2008-08-15 10:35:49

The 56 coincidence will be left up to the reader to interpret.  
 
I am not 56, my character is.  
 
My idea of the story was to write about how this guy thought he had someone he was keeping safe, but that person didn't need saving. It was actually the reverse.  
 
Thanks for reading.

Title article: GERMAN CRACKERS (Gambia: Christmas 2002)
Date: 2008-08-15 08:30:53
Good Flash Fiction
I'm glad you put the translation at the bottom because my German is a little, er, non-existent.  
 
Down here, my family does Cajun turkey for the holidays. We spice you up right.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: As We Know It
Date: 2008-08-13 08:43:33

Thanks for the read through's and comments.

Title article: The Graveyard Greens
Date: 2008-08-09 10:14:08
Good idea
Most people wouldn't mind. That way they would least be sure to have visitors on a regular basis. 
 
There's nothing more depressing than a neglected grave.

Title article: As We Know It
Date: 2008-08-05 00:03:05

Thanks for the comments. I did post this before. After I deleted my Boy and Buffalo stories, I was left with nothing on here again, so I wanted to throw something on. This is a much shorter version and I think it works better.  
 
It will be my only piece that I put on twice.  
 
Thanks again.

Title article: As We Know It
Date: 2008-08-03 15:29:55

I guess that's why i put it in the sci-fi genre. I just read some accounts from Hiroshima, and it doesn't seem that outlandish. 
 
Thanks for bringing me down.  
 
Fixed the two sentences with the "serious need of editing", thanks for bringing me down also.

Title article: Frantic, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-08-01 14:56:25

You could write a grammatically correct book about how many grammar errors I make on a daily basis. But no one would want to read it.  
 
On this site, I look at story telling techniques and talent. And with this story, I see a good story in the making, an excellent chapter that is fast paced, and good entertainment.  
 
I understand why people throw up grammar errors, and I surely don’t mind it on my stories, as I don’t want to put out a non perfect piece, but I don’t think you should give someone a poorer rating because of it, unless it is so bad it makes it unbearable to read.

Title article: THE FIRE
Date: 2008-08-01 08:11:01

I just wanted to say that my comment above was made when this story was only two paragraphs long. Now my words seem asinine.

Title article: THE FIRE
Date: 2008-07-31 22:18:29
Hmm
You gave a setting here, and one that you can definitely work with, however there is no story. 
 
Maybe that will come after a good night's sleep. But if not, then this is not quite a story. I WANT A STORY!!!

Title article: A Life Complete
Date: 2008-07-30 22:51:19
Comments
If you take a look of the comments above you'll see how you've created feeling in other people. 
 
That's what writing is about.  
 
Good job, and keep writing.

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 07/30/2008 23:55:51
I'm really enjoying 'The Boy and the Buffalo' - thought it was time I signed in.

Phil
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 05/26/2008 18:53:11
I read your blog.
I hope you realize that the Lakers will eat the flesh of the Spurs.
Ginobli is your only real hope. Duncan isn't being as dominant as he should, and Ginobli (even though I respect the guy), pulled some lucky shots that drove momentum for them in Game 3.

Enjoy the last few games of your season, fan of the Spurs.

From LA,
-CS.
Feedback from JJ Tyler (JJtyler): Your prophecy was correct! Although the Lakers didn't fare to well in the next round.

We'll see what happens in an odd year.

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