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Member Since	01/22/2008
Last Online	09/26/2008
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About Myself:

Supposedly my favorite thing to write about would be death, suicide, and murder, because no one seems to have the best idea for them.

I try to switch up my topics a lot, rather than talk about the same old thing in each one. But, I guess occasionally you'll find a poem similar to another.

Another thing I like to do is write in mainly first person view, usually having no names. I don't have many memorable, solid characters.

My longest story right now would be "Bang," but the rest are pretty short (excluding "Bodhisattva"), so if you'd rather not read for long, check the others out...unless you're just checking out my profile.

I hate Times New Roman font.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jun 1, 2008	Sixty-Seven	Mystery	262
May 3, 2008	I Can See Clearly	Poetry	198
May 3, 2008	Beginning = Ending	Poetry	173
Apr 18, 2008	Grotesque	Miscellaneous Stories	237
Apr 18, 2008	Jealousy	Poetry	217
Mar 13, 2008	Unhealthy	Poetry	231
Mar 6, 2008	Bodhisattva	Miscellaneous Stories	254
Mar 6, 2008	No Surprises	Non-Fiction	335
Feb 5, 2008	Incredible	Miscellaneous Stories	373
Jan 28, 2008	Invisible Soldier	Miscellaneous Stories	436
Jan 28, 2008	Endless Nights Can Only be Described Through the Eyes of the Lovely	Miscellaneous Stories	381
Jan 27, 2008	Story with a Meaningless Title	Miscellaneous Stories	302
Jan 27, 2008	Seven Deadly Sins	Poetry	760
Jan 26, 2008	End of Life	Horror	391
Jan 26, 2008	Bang	Romance	482
Jan 25, 2008	Death Within a Minute	Horror	388
Jan 25, 2008	Eventually We Will Escape	Horror	342
Jan 25, 2008	What an Awfully Gray Sky Day	Miscellaneous Stories	307
Jan 24, 2008	Coexistent	Poetry	302
Jan 24, 2008	Life	Poetry	337

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Comments

Title article: i'm of a dizzy heart
Date: 2008-05-06 17:51:42

Romance. So short, but very sweet. My favorite line would have to be "we trace cloud masses beneath a twin sky." Liked this one a lot.

Title article: Escape through the window
Date: 2008-05-06 17:48:09

This did have a ghostly dream-like effect. I think that's what made it so unique. It went from one step to the next very smoothly. I liked its eerie effect, as well as the relaxing satisfaction that was received in the end.

Title article: hidden tears
Date: 2008-05-06 17:43:52

Crying inside means, to me, you don't want anyone to see it. Locking things up inside lead to more hidden tears. And if no one likes that, why continue?

Title article: My Next Installment
Date: 2008-05-06 17:31:46

Wow, this was beautiful. My favorite lines would be the ones that obtained sinning. How very true. Your rhyming technique is one of the best I've ever read. Nice poem.

Title article: Waves
Date: 2008-05-06 17:26:21

There is so much going on in this. Not only the way it's versed, but repetition...like waves themselves. Geez, this is good. It helps me with some of my present day issues. I got to favorite this one.

Title article: The Human Greenhouse Effect (Expanded)
Date: 2008-05-06 17:21:49

I feel as though I could've been looking at the future while I read this. I believe this was pretty right-on to the worst scenario to global warming...Everyone going crazy. Great story.

Title article: I Can See Clearly
Date: 2008-05-06 17:14:15

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the comment.

Title article: Sometimes I Wish
Date: 2008-05-06 17:12:08

Absolutely romantic. It's patience is wonderful. That last line was the best line to wait for.

Title article: The Simple, yet Dramatic Occurences of a Lead Pencil
Date: 2008-05-03 17:58:20

I sort of feel bad for pencils now...At least the computer age is coming in, eventually we won't have to worry about killing pencils anymore.

What an interesting topic to write a poem on. Very unique, but what about erasers?

Title article: Love Without Me
Date: 2008-05-03 17:50:22

But don't just ditch her. That would be heartless. As much as it would seem that she cannot care about you, she actually cares about you so much, she's trying to get around with other men to forget about you. I hope this isn't a real event, because either way it's going to be a shitload of unhappiness for both. If the ditching commences, then she would get mad, but the only thing to keep her happy is to say, you'd be her friend, even though not, it would make her feel bad if she ever did do anything with another man.

Why did I answer your problem? I don't really know, maybe because you made it sound so realistic, I thought you needed help. I hope it does help. Love sort of sucks in the end.

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
07/05/2008 10:53:32	Re:Anywhere in the World	Off-Topic	1709
07/03/2008 20:16:18	Re:Anywhere in the World	Off-Topic	1709
06/29/2008 16:11:21	Re:Going to a better place	Off-Topic	305
06/29/2008 16:05:37	Re:Anywhere in the World	Off-Topic	1709
06/29/2008 16:03:43	Re:Who else believes?	Off-Topic	1485
06/29/2008 15:58:29	Re:What is your inspiration?	Off-Topic	379
06/07/2008 15:11:04	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	45857
06/07/2008 15:07:41	Re:What If?	Off-Topic	909
06/07/2008 14:58:25	Re:stupid offensive jokes anybody?	Off-Topic	2891
06/07/2008 14:48:44	Re:If Zombies Ruled the Earth...	Off-Topic	398

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Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 03/10/2008 20:56:57 Keiko hearts Rin. Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): What a sweet signature.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 03/06/2008 14:09:03 Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Pez! You keep filling up my guestbook! ...I can't yell at you, do what you please, but there is always revenge around the corner...
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 02/11/2008 13:29:12 Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/22/2008 13:12:34 Yes, I noticed; thank you very much for all of your comments. I have already read and commented on most, if not all, of your works.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 02/08/2008 07:31:02 Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/08/2008 07:32:20 Heh... no harm done . I'm way too self-conscious sometimes . I also very much enjoy your comments; if you've posted one on a story, it's one of the first that I read. I've yet to read most of your stories. But I will get on it soon. Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Wow, it's an honor for my comments to be one of the first you read. Hey, take your time on my stories, I'm working on yours too.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 02/06/2008 10:29:32 Energy? hehehe. Is that the nice way of saying I'm not such a great writer nowadays? hehehe. (^-^) Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): No! you always seem to have so much energy in your stories and comments...I'm going to go fix that now.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump) hill country, texas	Created On: 02/06/2008 00:28:09 your poetry has an interesting style, kinda like a flotation device... Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Hey thanks, I guess that would mean they're light in a sense.
Mugen (Dirkin)	Created On: 02/03/2008 03:26:05 signs Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Well you seem to be the only one to actually sign my guestbook...hehe.