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About Myself: Supposedly my favorite thing to write about would be death, suicide, and murder, because no one seems to have the best idea for them.

I try to switch up my topics a lot, rather than talk about the same old thing in each one. But, I guess occasionally you'll find a poem similar to another.

Another thing I like to do is write in mainly first person view, usually having no names. I don't have many memorable, solid characters.

My longest story right now would be "Bang," but the rest are pretty short (excluding "Bodhisattva"), so if you'd rather not read for long, check the others out...unless you're just checking out my profile.

I hate Times New Roman font.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jun 1, 2008Sixty-SevenMystery 255
May 3, 2008I Can See ClearlyPoetry 196
May 3, 2008Beginning = EndingPoetry 171
Apr 18, 2008GrotesqueMiscellaneous Stories 234
Apr 18, 2008JealousyPoetry 215
Mar 13, 2008UnhealthyPoetry 229
Mar 6, 2008BodhisattvaMiscellaneous Stories 252
Mar 6, 2008No SurprisesNon-Fiction 332
Feb 5, 2008IncredibleMiscellaneous Stories 372
Jan 28, 2008Invisible SoldierMiscellaneous Stories 434
Jan 28, 2008Endless Nights Can Only be Described Through the Eyes of the LovelyMiscellaneous Stories 379
Jan 27, 2008Story with a Meaningless TitleMiscellaneous Stories 299
Jan 27, 2008Seven Deadly SinsPoetry 751
Jan 26, 2008End of LifeHorror 390
Jan 26, 2008BangRomance 478
Jan 25, 2008Death Within a MinuteHorror 387
Jan 25, 2008Eventually We Will EscapeHorror 339
Jan 25, 2008What an Awfully Gray Sky DayMiscellaneous Stories 306
Jan 24, 2008CoexistentPoetry 300
Jan 24, 2008LifePoetry 336
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Title article: I Can See Clearly
Date: 2008-05-07 14:54:18

Thanks for the comment, it is nice thinking there is a whole.

Title article: Beginning = Ending
Date: 2008-05-07 14:52:48

I guess it was a bit complicated to show. Practically I tried to describe an unrealistic beginning to the world. And the phrase" Buildings became too rooty" describes how companies and factories and skyscrapers spread (like roots). And "The air became entirely flirty" expresses how we became to breathe, the air started to "flirt" with organisms, bringing them to us. 
 
I hope that helps.

Title article: Life In The Family
Date: 2008-05-06 18:32:12

How eerie. A great tone was set in this. Especially when the voice was occurring. I think I might have gotten a shiver up my spine when reading that. And the unexpected "I won" attitude at the end completed it. 
 
I've had it where my dad confronted me about one of my suicide stories. Nothing too much fun to go through. But I never had the laughing conscience.

Title article: Breaking Point
Date: 2008-05-06 18:22:02

One of the most beautiful and ugliest things to experience. Love. You convey your emotions very well without overdoing it. It's a great talent.

Title article: Nightmare
Date: 2008-05-06 18:18:14

As everyone else has said, it is very rhythmic (as well as all of your poetry). Your skills always leave me in awe. Another magnificent poem I got the chance to read. Lucky me.

Title article: In The Rain -- My first attempt at poetry
Date: 2008-05-06 18:13:57

To answer your question, I don't think it should matter the time it takes to write a short poem. It could be four lines short, but have the greatest meaning to it which would have taken plenty of time. Or maybe it's the matter on saying what is on your mind at the moment which could take ten minutes or less even. 
 
But other than that, your poem was great. the happiness was shown through how it would be spoken or just the events taking place. The poem reminds me of a quote, "If you think sunshine is happiness, then you've never danced in the rain."

Title article: your irony
Date: 2008-05-06 18:09:40

Is she in love with someone who won't do good for her? Is he acting? Can she see it? I think I have a lot of questions for this, but I hope I get the gist of it. Maybe she's indecisive. Either way, it was an emotional poem.

Title article: Your Life
Date: 2008-05-06 18:05:44

Some powerful meaning in that. This was great. I liked the phrasing of how everything had a question to be asked until the decision in the end.  
 
I agree with thirteen, I think most of us do feel like this at times.

Title article: The end to all wars
Date: 2008-05-06 18:01:39

This is interesting. For how short it is, it brings a bigger meaning. Would we care if he was theirs? Or would it be another reason for more war? Extraordinary.

Title article: 0900 HRS
Date: 2008-05-06 17:59:14

What an ending to a story. I'm impressed. At a glance I noticed there was a quote at the bottom and when I began the story I was anxious to know what he said. I feel as though this would be the perfect beginning to some James Bond or Mission Impossible movie. Great job.

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07/05/2008 10:53:32Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1623
07/03/2008 20:16:18Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1623
06/29/2008 16:11:21Re:Going to a better placeOff-Topic297
06/29/2008 16:05:37Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1623
06/29/2008 16:03:43Re:Who else believes?Off-Topic1449
06/29/2008 15:58:29Re:What is your inspiration?Off-Topic357
06/07/2008 15:11:04Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic44984
06/07/2008 15:07:41Re:What If?Off-Topic864
06/07/2008 14:58:25Re:stupid offensive jokes anybody?Off-Topic2850
06/07/2008 14:48:44Re:If Zombies Ruled the Earth...Off-Topic390

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Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 03/10/2008 20:56:57
Keiko *hearts* Rin.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): What a sweet signature.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 03/06/2008 14:09:03
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Pez! You keep filling up my guestbook! ...I can't yell at you, do what you please, but there is always revenge around the corner...
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/11/2008 13:29:12
Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/22/2008 13:12:34
Yes, I noticed; thank you very much for all of your comments.

I have already read and commented on most, if not all, of your works.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/08/2008 07:31:02
Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/08/2008 07:32:20
Heh... no harm done . I'm way too self-conscious sometimes .

I also very much enjoy your comments; if you've posted one on a story, it's one of the first that I read. I've yet to read most of your stories. But I will get on it soon.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Wow, it's an honor for my comments to be one of the first you read. Hey, take your time on my stories, I'm working on yours too.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/06/2008 10:29:32
Energy? hehehe. Is that the nice way of saying I'm not such a great writer nowadays? hehehe. (^-^)
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): No! you always seem to have so much energy in your stories and comments...I'm going to go fix that now.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 02/06/2008 00:28:09
your poetry has an interesting style, kinda like a flotation device...
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Hey thanks, I guess that would mean they're light in a sense.
Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 02/03/2008 03:26:05
*signs*
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Well you seem to be the only one to actually sign my guestbook...hehe.

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