Apparition of Justice

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A Date with Priya

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Egoist (Egoist)
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Member Since 01/22/2008
Last Online 08/17/2008
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About Myself: Supposedly my favorite thing to write about would be death, suicide, and murder, because no one seems to have the best idea of them.

I try to switch up my topics a lot, rather than talk about the same old thing in each one. But, I guess occasionally you'll find a poem similar to another.

Another thing I like to do is write in mainly first person view, usually having no names. I don't have many memorable, solid characters.

My longest story right now would be "Bang," but the rest are pretty short (excluding "Bodhisattva"), so if you'd rather not read for long, check the others out...unless you're just checking out my profile.

I hate Times New Roman font.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jan 22, 2008Seven Letter WordHorror 902
Jan 27, 2008Seven Deadly SinsPoetry 673
Jan 26, 2008BangRomance 456
Jan 22, 2008Why Do Our Wishes Not Come True?Poetry 453
Jan 28, 2008Invisible SoldierMiscellaneous Stories 405
Jan 22, 2008BlasphemyPoetry 382
Jan 26, 2008End of LifeHorror 367
Jan 23, 2008I Have a Tendency to Hurt Myself He SaysMiscellaneous Stories 365
Jan 25, 2008Death Within a MinuteHorror 362
Jan 28, 2008Endless Nights Can Only be Described Through the Eyes of the LovelyMiscellaneous Stories 355
Jan 23, 2008Beauty in DeathHorror 349
Feb 5, 2008IncredibleMiscellaneous Stories 342
Jan 23, 2008Surprisingly I Woke Up AgainMiscellaneous Stories 323
Jan 25, 2008Eventually We Will EscapeHorror 322
Jan 24, 2008LifePoetry 319
Jan 22, 2008Abnormality of the Sky's New FacePoetry 319
Mar 6, 2008No SurprisesNon-Fiction 301
Jan 23, 2008Last to BleedPoetry 298
Jan 23, 2008The Day the Sun Went the Other WayPoetry 291
Jan 25, 2008What an Awfully Gray Sky DayMiscellaneous Stories 286
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Comments

Total number of comments: 270

Title article: Red Tears
Date: 2008-08-14 19:31:21

I wasn't expecting it to be the popular girl. I was heading along with the flow of the story (which was very smooth), then all of a sudden the unexpected character is revealed. I liked how you tied the story in with a painting , and how the story was told through a bland person's mind.  
 
A creative story, and my favorite part was the secretive mind that the popular girl has.

Title article: Resident Evil Desiples Teaser
Date: 2008-08-14 19:12:36

A good story to read from a long break. I really enjoyed this, it seemed extremely detailed if for what would have lasted 10 minutes in real life. As well as the outstanding detail, it felt very interactive. The story was well described for the situation taking place. And yes, the Resident Evil effect is very clear.  
 
Right now, a lot of things aren't to evident, but I'm sure they're to be explained later. My favorite part would be the unexpected place to be shot.  
 
This was an extremely interesting and great grab for this soon to be series. I'm looking forward to reading the next.

Title article: Haze XIV : Megiddo
Date: 2008-06-28 13:18:46

Holy crap! What a twist! So every one of his friends has either died or turned against him. And now he has arrived at the only haven to the disaster, that not even the people are fazed. This is going to be a great ending, I can feel it.

Title article: Sixty-Seven
Date: 2008-06-21 11:19:16

Try reading it backwards.

Title article: Endless Nights Can Only be Described Through the Eyes of the Lovely
Date: 2008-06-15 17:43:56

Thank you. I remember the exact day I wrote this (of course it was raining). But what made me want to write it was the sunset which had freed itself from the clouds. To see a sunset while it's pouring is a beautiful sight. Glad you liked it.

Title article: On Word
Date: 2008-06-10 09:59:17

I can't get over how deep your poetry is Anna. You display such grace and beauty in every line. Antipersonification, is that what it would be called? I call it perfect.

Title article: Haze XIII : Operation Axehead
Date: 2008-06-10 09:40:45

"Sorry, but after what I've seen today i'm a little jumpy" said Jake apologetically -That was funny. I can't say I was expecting bodies piled up on each other from the military to be the thing to make the lady puke. And now Axehead? Geez, the military chose to team up with the other hospital? When will this madness end? Tune in next time to Haze XIV!

Title article: Haze XII : Renewal
Date: 2008-06-10 09:33:25

Cliffhanger! Man, she puked. Everyone pukes. I think he's infected, and maybe he'll tunr into another angel. Just my theory. I think this was a relaxing chapter to the series. It's nice to calm down from all the tension...But the ending must be near!

Title article: Haze XI: Awakening (Updated)
Date: 2008-06-10 09:23:31

"Do you think he will team up with the angel?" he said in a scared voice "I definatly hope not Lional, I definatly hope not." -Oh, well that's ironic (or so). Not wanting to team up with an 'angel.' 
 
This keeps getting creepier and creepier, at least they have a way out of the freezer now. How is this going to end?

Title article: Spending time on the ground
Date: 2008-06-09 16:57:23

This was extremely interesting! I really needed this! Really! I enjoy stories like this, and how it was planned together. What a difference from your series Haze. Though, I'm not too sure how he died. The road and piece of metal gave me hints, but it's good to leave questions.  
 
Heaven, huh? Wow, he actually killed himself. 
 
The imagery was great, how he broke his arm, then he was free of pain, but then when they were trying to bring him back he felt it again. I felt like I was actually laying there myself. This was awesome! I expect more like this!

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07/05/2008 10:53:32Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1196
07/03/2008 20:16:18Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1196
06/29/2008 16:11:21Re:Going to a better placeOff-Topic222
06/29/2008 16:05:37Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1196
06/29/2008 16:03:43Re:Who else believes?Off-Topic1169
06/29/2008 15:58:29Re:What is your inspiration?Off-Topic252
06/07/2008 15:11:04Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic34073
06/07/2008 15:07:41Re:What If?Off-Topic616
06/07/2008 14:58:25Re:stupid offensive jokes anybody?Off-Topic2159
06/07/2008 14:48:44Re:If Zombies Ruled the Earth...Off-Topic293

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Jeremy Fitzgerald (Guitarist986)

 Created On: 06/20/2008 19:30:10
Hey just thought I'd write on this thing I'm still trying to figure everything out about this site and I'm glad your here as my friend thanks.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): No problem! Looking forward to writing with you!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 03/10/2008 20:56:57
Keiko *hearts* Rin.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): What a sweet signature.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 03/06/2008 14:09:03
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Pez! You keep filling up my guestbook! ...I can't yell at you, do what you please, but there is always revenge around the corner...
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/11/2008 13:29:12
Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/22/2008 13:12:34
Yes, I noticed; thank you very much for all of your comments.

I have already read and commented on most, if not all, of your works.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/08/2008 07:31:02
Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/08/2008 07:32:20
Heh... no harm done . I'm way too self-conscious sometimes .

I also very much enjoy your comments; if you've posted one on a story, it's one of the first that I read. I've yet to read most of your stories. But I will get on it soon.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Wow, it's an honor for my comments to be one of the first you read. Hey, take your time on my stories, I'm working on yours too.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/06/2008 10:29:32
Energy? hehehe. Is that the nice way of saying I'm not such a great writer nowadays? hehehe. (^-^)
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): No! you always seem to have so much energy in your stories and comments...I'm going to go fix that now.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 02/06/2008 00:28:09
your poetry has an interesting style, kinda like a flotation device...
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Hey thanks, I guess that would mean they're light in a sense.
Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 02/03/2008 03:26:05
*signs*
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Well you seem to be the only one to actually sign my guestbook...hehe.

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