Nights Journey

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About Myself: Will they... Will they talk about me this way if I die, too? I was this and that. Using past tense, saying whatever they want? So this is what death is all about... ...Not for me. I won't have it!!!


Amidst the eternal waves of time
From a ripple of change shall the storm rise
Out of the abyss peer the eyes of a demon
Behold the Razgriz, its wings of black sheath
The demon soars through dark skies
Fear and death trail in its shadow beneath
Until men united wield a hallowed sabre
In final reckoning, the beast is slain
As the demon sleeps man turns on man
His blood and madness soon cover the earth
From the depths of despair awaken the Razgriz
Its black wings ablaze in majestic light

Focus. Control. Conviction. Resolve. A true ace lacks none of these attributes. Nothing can deter you from the task at hand except your own fears. This is your sky.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
May 22, 2008A WoW Story, Chapter 1Adventure 258
Jun 6, 2008A WoW Story, Chapter 2Adventure 172
Jul 2, 2008A WoW Story, Chapter 3Adventure 135
Jun 23, 2008Darkening, Chapter 0Miscellaneous Stories 144
Aug 19, 2008Darkening, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 178
Apr 29, 2008Prelude to a wow story, Chapter 0Adventure 301
Jul 15, 2008Some Random ThoughtsNon-Fiction 114
May 20, 2008The Three Little Pigs Pt. 4Horror 229
May 12, 2008The Three Little Pigs Pt2Horror 154
May 12, 2008The Three Little Pigs Pt3Horror 168
May 8, 2008Three Little Pigs (Prologue)Horror 250
May 9, 2008Three Little Pigs Pt. 1Horror 161
Jun 19, 2008What really happens in the wilderness.Miscellaneous Stories 147
May 20, 2008Without HerRomance 230

Comments

Total number of comments: 371

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-27 13:06:14
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Thank you for reading the story. 
 
And thank you for your comments. 
 
I have started the next chapter is should be finished within the next few days.

Title article: I Am
Date: 2008-08-26 12:26:25
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That was indeed something different, at first I thought it was an assassin heading to his target, but it turned out to be your cat.  
 
Very tricky of you. 
 
Cats name is reference to Maximums from Gladiator? 
 
Well-played young sir well played.

Title article: Das Babu
Date: 2008-08-26 12:10:25
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Mixed feelings about this, on one hand you have a well-written well-composed story. On the other you have your take on the story about the lover who came back to see his / her darling one last time, before watching over said darling, something that has been done by many people while this is not a negative it is not a positive either. 
 
The details seemed to flow at first then they seemed to dry up and nothing came of them and while I don’t think there should be much added perhaps around the end their conversation should be edited to sound less forced.  
 
Keep up the good work.

Title article: Paranoid/Forget
Date: 2008-08-26 11:49:22
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This was decent, it has the potential to be something more, but then again it doesn’t have to be this extravagant story it is what it’s supposed to be. It conveys the message that the cancer is causing her to lose her memory and that in turn is causing her to be paranoid. 
 
Keep it up.

Title article: No Forgiveness
Date: 2008-08-26 11:11:44
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Liked it. 
 
I thought it was hilarious how he killed the intruder, well who he thought as an intrueder, and then he went to sleep. 
 
Sucks for his wife, that’s gotta be a bad day to say the least. 
 
Nice work. 
 
Keep it up.

Title article: Antz
Date: 2008-08-26 11:03:13
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That was better than what I expected. 
 
The tents and little fires, and a tap on the milk, hilarious visual effects.  
 
Reminder to self: get a night light so the ants wont burn down my house, just imagine having to write yourself a note like that. 
 
Great job.

Title article: Trying to Concentrate on Freedom
Date: 2008-08-26 10:58:46
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I thought it was something completely different than it actually came out to be. 
 
It was well written, better than I could have wrote it at least. 
 
It immersed the reader smoothly into and out of the story. 
 
Left me a bit sad.

Title article: Without the Word
Date: 2008-08-26 10:54:26
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it all seemed a bit forced and it seemed to me to drag on, but then again i felt as if i was drowning in details, but i also felt that without thoes details that i would hunger for more details so its a win lose situation for me. 
 
that it my guess.

Title article: The Chelsea Apartment
Date: 2008-08-26 10:46:12
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That was unusual to say the least. 
 
First I thought she was going to kill him but now I just think she’s just a psycho. 
 
Oh well what can be expected after what her boy friend did to her? 
 
Well written, keep up the good work.

Title article: Stolen Innocence, Childhood Lost
Date: 2008-08-26 10:34:13
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I’m glad you didn’t make it go any further than that, at least in the story. 
 
It had a creepy feel to it. 
 
very very creepy. to say the least.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Created On: 08/12/2008 08:15:16

Didja forget about WoW 4 and What Really Happens in the Wilderness 2?

Come on, Slacker

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

a wasteland
Created On: 06/12/2008 14:08:16

dude ...

V for Vendetta fucking rules!


Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Created On: 06/11/2008 12:53:33

Wow, You Got Some Weird Pictures out of nowhere,
next you will have a pic of a flying bear,
or a talking beer,

a bullet flying through a chest,
a skeleton not put to rest,
just remember to say Fuck You to the rest...


Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Created On: 05/07/2008 14:41:58
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 05/07/2008 14:42:47


The story of yours that i read was really good. You also leave some really good comment on my stories. Thank you.

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