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About Myself: Oh I'm so glad you're here! I am in some deep shit, man. Can you help? Please?

Well .... what did I do? Where do I start? I've killed a lot of people. Some girls in the apartment uptown. Uh ... some homeless people, maybe five or ten. Um ... a NYU girl I met in Central Park. I left her in a parking lot behind some donut shop. I killed Bethany, my old girlfriend, with a nail gun, and some man -- uh ... some old faggot with a dog last week. I killed another girl with a chainsaw, I had to, she almost got away and uh ... someone else there I can't remember, maybe a model, but she's dead too. And Paul Allen. I killed Paul Allen with an axe in the face. His body is dissolving in a bathtub in Hell's Kitchen. I don't want to leave anything out here. I guess I've killed maybe twenty people, maybe forty. I have tapes of a lot of it, uh ... some of the girls have seen the tapes. I even, um ... I ate some of their brains, and I tried to cook a little. Tonight I, uh, I just had to kill a LOT of people. And I'm not sure I'm gonna get away with it this time. I guess I'll uh, I mean, ah, I guess I'm a pretty uh, I mean I guess I'm a pretty sick guy.

So, do you think you can help me out? I don't know what to do. You don't think I'm crazy, do you? You're not judging me like the rest of them do, are you? Please? We can be friends ... I promise. No, I don't want to get you drunk ... but uh ... that's a nice Chardonnay you're not drinking. Well, just think this over for a bit, okay? I really hope you decide to help me out. I don't know who else to turn to. You're my last chance.

Now, if you'll excuse me ... I have to return some videotapes.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 5, 2008Jericho, Chapter 13Miscellaneous Stories 53
Sep 4, 2008Jericho, Chapter 12Miscellaneous Stories 94
Sep 2, 2008Jericho, Chapter 11Miscellaneous Stories 86
Sep 1, 2008Jericho, Chapter 10Miscellaneous Stories 228
Aug 30, 2008Jericho, Chapter 9Miscellaneous Stories 124
Aug 27, 2008Pretty Fly for a Russian GuyHumor 731
Aug 26, 2008Jericho, Chapter 8Miscellaneous Stories 131
Aug 25, 2008Trained to KillPoetry 131
Aug 25, 2008Jericho, Chapter 7Miscellaneous Stories 130
Aug 22, 2008Jericho, Chapter 6Miscellaneous Stories 156
Aug 19, 2008Jericho, Chapter 5Miscellaneous Stories 152
Aug 16, 2008Jericho, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 150
Aug 14, 2008Jericho, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 174
Aug 13, 2008Suburban HellMystery 258
Aug 13, 2008Jericho, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 197
Aug 12, 2008Panhandling ScumPoetry 153
Aug 12, 2008Jericho, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 351
Aug 11, 2008Tears from a Burnt CigarPoetry 177
Aug 11, 2008Jericho, Chapter 0Miscellaneous Stories 411
Aug 10, 2008The Book CellarHorror 504
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Total number of comments: 1214

Title article: Room 1135
Date: 2008-09-06 19:31:23

Whoa ... i never noticed that before. Pretty cool.

Title article: The Lighthouse
Date: 2008-09-06 18:54:57
The Lighthouse
That is just bloody cool looking. That has to be one of the best image Poems I've read on here. It also helps that the Poem is actually good! It's really cool how the light shining away from the lighthouse looks. 
 
I AM THE LIGHT OF THE WORLD 
 
Cheers!

Title article: is this poetry
Date: 2008-09-06 17:59:12
I liked it
I'd work on the flow a little bit, maybe find less words to get your point across?  
 
Other than that, though, I really enjoyed this Poem. You might wanna find a different name for it though, but that's just my opinion. Loved the message in this .. such hatred! your emotions were there with ease ... great job. 
 
Cheers!

Title article: Rage
Date: 2008-09-06 17:31:25
Rage
Short, great, and to the point. Excellent.  
 
I really liked this Poem, very easy to visualize and it deals with a very relatable topic. I think you did an awesome job with your wording choice. 
 
Really great job. 
 
Cheers!

Title article: Through Open Eyes
Date: 2008-09-06 13:14:10
Through Open Eyes
There isn't many Poems that I've read that I could actually call it a thriller, but this is one of those exceptions. This was really suspensful. Like a Poetic rollercoaster without any breaks. Awesome verse indeed. The very first line has the most meaning to me, though. I don't know why, but it just hit me hard. There's somthin' about that. I dunno, maybe it'll come to me later on. 
 
Cheers!

Title article: HORROR
Date: 2008-09-05 22:21:38
HORROR
Some people do not like being compared to a song, but please do not take this the wrong way when i say it: this song could easily have been written by Bad Religion. It was excellent, man. Simply excellent. I loved it. 
 
Cheers!

Title article: Those Hills
Date: 2008-09-05 22:19:07
Those Hills
Wow! You can really throw down on some Poetry, can't you? This was awesome, man. Loved the flow and I have to say this is just really good! There is one word that could describe this poem, though. 
 
Beautiful.

Title article: Things aren't always as they appear
Date: 2008-09-05 21:00:09
Things aren't always as they appear
Kind of strange that he's her boyfriend but they've never met in person, dontcha think? Or did i miss something? 
 
Yeah, I think you're hidden message behind this was great. It's very true. Do not I Repeat DO NOT trust those hooligans ... nothing but trouble comes from them. 
 
I liked this story, but I felt something was missing, as if you ended it too abruptly, you know? Since it's non fiction I guess it's okay, but I bet you could turn this into a really kickass horror story about a stalker. Think about it now, so many possibilities! You could really make a true thriller/horror story out of it.  
 
That kid from Indiana ... it really could have been anyone. ANYONE!!! Beware! Beware of the children from the corn! BEWWWAAAAAAARRRREEE!

Title article: Sometimes It Still Hurts
Date: 2008-09-05 15:47:30
Oh my ...
This brought a tear to my eye ... I'm speachless.

Title article: The Monkey
Date: 2008-09-05 13:59:18
The Monkey
I really loved the great detailed descriptions you had here. All veryh vivid, really easy to visualize in my head. I kind of have to agree with Juttabell^^, though. The last paragraph seemed sort of hurried. The paragraph before the last was absolutely hilarious, though. I always fine anything having to do with a primate amusing. I just can't take them serious.  
 
Great story you have here and welcome to StoriesVille. 
 
Cheers!

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 09/07/2008 00:21:40
Yeah I'm using it right now. Damn I'm stupid.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 09/07/2008 00:15:14
Yeah I just need to do a spell check on it so I don't look ignorant. The one on this site doesn't work here for some reason. Stupid words and their stupid diputs ffuts.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 09/07/2008 00:06:20
Oh yeah I forgot to tell you. Jesus has risen. And he wants his royalties for the Bible. Man court tv is going to be interesting this month!
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 09/06/2008 23:49:18
Yeah it seems like a pretty badass site. I've been typing out this new story and I swear to God I've typed it over three times. I wish I could save shit here at work. But then again the boss could end up reading them.......and find out just how 'normal' I really am. Hhhmmmm he might start wearing gloves to work.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 09/06/2008 23:38:11
lol that's some twisted shit man! There's brutality humor everywhere I love it! I wonder if the victems take this shit seriously. That'd be messed up. My mom tried to abort me once..........I think it worked.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 09/06/2008 22:04:08
That was fucking hilarious with the dick puppet line! lol I put on a little play. Some of this shit is really good.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 09/06/2008 21:48:38
Haha, I'm checking it out right now. Pretty crazy shit.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 09/06/2008 21:13:55
Edited By Jason Haugh (Something Indecent) On: 09/06/2008 21:42:44
Yes love can be a cruel mistress. That's why you have to bridle and saddle her so the ride is much smoother. And if she starts using more cruel just slice up her acheles(?) tendon and make her march a mile. You tell love, "You're my bitch now." That'll get it to respect you. Or, like in your case, sometimes you just have to bury love in the backyard.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 09/06/2008 20:51:58
Don't you Bee me Booth! I just thought of a nice way to eat ramen. Through a straw. If you ground it up enough or shredded it in a blender after it's cooked you could get bypass the hand operation and get to the source much quicker and easier. I'm going to have to experiment on this at home.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 09/05/2008 22:43:49
You mean you've never seen Space Ghost!? It was the first Cartoon Network show that started in the mid 90's and created by the guys who made Harvey Birdman, Sealab, and Aqua Teen. It's basically like a poorly thrown together talk show with Space Ghost interviewing celebrities. It's pretty funny.

I'm not spilling anything. Well I just did in the bathroom but uuuuuuhhhhhh that couldn't be helped.

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