A Date with Priya

It was a typical winter evening in Kolkata. Velvety...

There Is Only One Star, Chapter 4

MEET KHWAHN Somewhere around six...
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DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 23, 2008Under my skin, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 38
Aug 22, 2008The EndMiscellaneous Stories 61
Aug 20, 2008Dad LoveNon-Fiction 69
Aug 13, 2008Garryowen, Chapter 4Non-Fiction 33
Aug 12, 2008garryowen, Chapter 3Non-Fiction 48
Aug 11, 2008Garryowen, Chapter 2Non-Fiction 60
Aug 5, 2008Eleanor, Chapter 10Adventure 45
Aug 5, 2008Eleanor, Chapter 9Adventure 48
Aug 2, 2008Eleanor, Chapter 8Adventure 58
Jul 31, 2008Eleanor, Chapter 7Adventure 62
Jul 27, 2008Eleanor, Chapter 6Adventure 60
Jul 26, 2008Eleanor, Chapter 5Adventure 73
Jul 24, 2008Eleanor, Chapter 4Adventure 62
Jul 23, 2008Eleanor, Chapter 3Adventure 74
Jul 20, 2008Eleanor, Chapter 2Adventure 90
Jul 20, 2008EleanorMiscellaneous Stories 109
Jul 15, 2008WhyPoetry 138
Jul 3, 2008Just another point of viewPoetry 130
Jul 1, 2008Garryowen, Chapter 1Non-Fiction 109
Jul 1, 2008GracePoetry 109
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Total number of comments: 118

Title article: Ode to Simplicity
Date: 2008-08-27 03:28:24

I enjoyed this very much. The curse of life is the loss of innocence. Your poem put me in mind of a richard thompson song called 'how will i ever be simple again' 
 
So graceful she moved through the dust and the ruin 
And happy she was in her dances and games 
Oh teach me to see with your innocent eyes, love 
Oh how will I ever be simple again 
Oh how will I ever be simple again

Title article: Trained to Kill
Date: 2008-08-26 03:36:52

This is well written max. my best line is 'I’m sick of blacking out almost everyday, 
I don’t like this monster that I now portray.'  
There is so much war that I think they should simply drop the Gulf, Iraq, Vietnam, Afghanistan, and call it plain old 'WAR.'

Title article: Antz
Date: 2008-08-26 03:17:08

Nice story. can't wait to get the magnifying thingy out tonight. 
Here in Australia we have white ants and they live extremely secluded lives, boring little feckers.

Title article: Paranoid/Forget
Date: 2008-08-26 03:04:24

I felt that this started out well and promised a lot but needed to find another gear. Maybe when it came to the phone call she could have really paid out big time for being stood up before realizing that it was her her got tyhe date wrong.

Title article: EVENING.
Date: 2008-08-26 02:51:18

An outstanding piece of writing terry. Well done. The saxaphones such a sensual sound. I liked the pace in particular.

Title article: PUT DOWN IN HULL (1965)
Date: 2008-08-24 22:35:38

Loved I. I'd say the fish smell was a distant memory. I havent been in the filthy place for years, but i imagin it somehow different these days. Please? if only for my benafit, refuse to talk down to the kids and the insular.

Title article: You Can Eat Now
Date: 2008-08-23 03:08:39

Well done august. This is a charming piece of work. I guess you have to be a teenage girl or a very old old wise man like me-self to get the ending. The picture set the mood nicely for a shivery of-beat tale

Title article: missing
Date: 2008-08-23 02:54:58

Great story I thought that i had it figured half way through but you were a twist ahead of me. I think maybe a little tweeking would make this story even greater. Alas i can't offer anything definite but the advise about reading it aloud was sound advice.

Title article: Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise
Date: 2008-08-23 02:42:47

Its alway darkest just before the dawn. This piece was well written even if a little morbid for some. From my personal point of view i connected with the poem 
And i guess it left me pondering tthe dilema that each new sunrise cares to remember.

Title article: My Present
Date: 2008-08-23 02:28:37

A bit predictable for my taste but its definitly comercial enought to sell a few million cards. The point is thats its well written.

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