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Member Since	03/06/2008
Last Online	10/11/2008
Connections	16
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About Myself:

I write random things that come to me when I least expect them.
I'm not a dark person, but for whatever reason a lot of my writing is dark. Leave me comments so that I can improve-- If we don't get criticized, we can't grow. :)

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 15, 2008	The Waitress	Miscellaneous Stories	1092
Aug 29, 2008	A Lover's Garden	Poetry	148
Aug 25, 2008	Lemon: a Haiku	Poetry	392
Aug 12, 2008	The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 3	Miscellaneous Stories	155
Aug 10, 2008	The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 2	Miscellaneous Stories	179
Aug 6, 2008	The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	379
Aug 3, 2008	Walking Along the Shore	Poetry	204
Jul 30, 2008	Stranded at Sea	Miscellaneous Stories	236
Jul 26, 2008	The Mexican Lasagna Incident	Humor	274
Jul 21, 2008	All Liquid Diet	Miscellaneous Stories	296
Jul 20, 2008	The Past	Poetry	141
Jul 20, 2008	Once Again	Poetry	140
Jul 16, 2008	On The Mend	Poetry	143
Jul 13, 2008	This Internal Poison	Poetry	211
Jul 13, 2008	The One	Poetry	225
Jul 12, 2008	A Bad Day	Poetry	187
Jul 11, 2008	The Reluctant Lover	Miscellaneous Stories	428
Jul 10, 2008	Blind	Poetry	166
Jul 9, 2008	Life's Little Games	Poetry	164
Jul 9, 2008	Insanity of the Sane	Poetry	171

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Books

Title	Date
Lemon Juice and Poetry	Aug 2, 2008

Comments

Total number of comments: 929

Title article: Palin Fever
Date: 2008-10-11 17:25:45

You are so damn random Jason. but hey, its alright. it keeps us on our toes. now i have to add cartoon characters to my list of things to keep away from you. haha. Great conversation piece.

Title article: At My Funeral
Date: 2008-10-11 17:20:34

Interesting lol. I would chose to be dressed as a clown for my 'grave clothes' so that people will freak out and have nightmares after the open casket viewing.

ah too bad i wouldnt be able to see it. 0.o

Title article: Dank Pasta
Date: 2008-10-11 17:14:51

I thought this was actually pretty funny. I dont know how many times I've added an ingredient into an almost finished recipe only to realize the package was a)expired b)from a questionable brand or c)something thats been in my fridge too long, but i'm convincing myself it should be fine. BUT rather than still eating it, I THROW IT AWAY lol. believe me, once you've been in the hospital for seven days from severe dehydration and food poisoning... you dont risk things involving your stomach lol

Title article: Love In Vein
Date: 2008-09-27 21:48:08

This was very good. i dont think i've read any of your stuff before, but this was very well written and you did great with the dialog.

i like how the guy didnt REALLY want to turn even though he loves her.
nice touch with the poem at the end. i really liked it. =]

Title article: Blue Sky
Date: 2008-09-27 21:36:19

The imagery in this poem was really very good. i could 'see' this poem very clearly in my minds eye.

very, very nice job! Keep these coming.

=]

Title article: The Mechanical Beast
Date: 2008-09-27 21:33:01

Good job.. I liked the way you related mechanics (cold, without feeling) to a person. I thought this was done very well and with no wasted words.

=]

Title article: Suggestion
Date: 2008-09-27 19:45:29

Stories about Annorexia are very disturbing.. I wrote one called 'The all liquid diet' and it freaked me out when i wrote that.

Nice job though and kudos to you for writing about such a touchy subject. =]

Title article: An Undeniable Truth
Date: 2008-09-27 19:40:31

Great story! I like reading these kinds of stories and Scooby, I too got a little upset at Pilgrim for walking ahead of you lol.

anyway, I'm glad you found the truth on that trip =]

Title article: To all the Young Lovers
Date: 2008-09-27 19:31:14

This was very well written and told an excellent story of love.

My mom-ness is going on overload lately though from my oldest daughter disappearing for awhile and i SO did not need to think she was naked in some dude's attic though haha eeep! o.0

Title article: The Purple Beneath, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-09-27 19:27:39

This is good Max. you're talent is definitely developing nicely. I like how you throw even the small background stuff for the character like the crying son in the chair with the shrek bib.
Nice job =]

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
10/11/2008 10:30:56	Re:The forum monopolizes my time	Off-Topic	414
10/11/2008 10:29:30	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314478
10/10/2008 16:26:24	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314478
10/10/2008 16:24:58	Re:The forum monopolizes my time	Off-Topic	414
10/10/2008 16:17:26	Re:The forum monopolizes my time	Off-Topic	414
10/10/2008 16:14:08	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314478
09/24/2008 13:30:01	Re:Hi.	Off-Topic	4186
09/24/2008 13:28:23	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314478
09/24/2008 12:05:13	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314478
09/24/2008 11:57:50	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314478

Connection

Amie Kerlin (lemon)'s connections

J.L. (the Processor)

Amy Carter (scooby)

Project 30 (Project 30)

jesse (jesse2008)

fabian villegas (fevilleg)

Jessica S,A. (Forsaken)

Jamie Steatham (Lord Pinkington)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

Matthew Daniel Carter (Pilgrim)

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 10/11/2008 15:44:48 Sup, lemon lime?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 19:41:40 I was just on the freecreditreport website .... damn i was so close to signing you up .... why do zombies have to be so nice? it isn't fair!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 19:32:05 Hey, hey, you don't want to do anything you might regret, do you?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 18:01:20 I'll sign you up for the NAMBLA newsletter ... North American Marlon Brando Look Alikes
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 13:50:16 SPAM!!! ha! told you i'd get you back
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/22/2008 08:28:59 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 09/22/2008 15:25:20 I know ..... i should really start doing that. I mean, you can never have enough pictures of Lemons ....... I'm writing a story about a zombie who mugs a human ....... it's called Pauly Shore Is Undead.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 21:36:41 Yeah, because it's normal to just randomly search for pictures of Lemons ... Are you really going to write the story?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 19:37:15 seriously, is there like a website devoted to making different pictures of lemons?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 13:03:10 Write a story about a hitman wearing a lemon suit who murders the freecreditreport.com guy. That'd be entertaining.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 03:04:46 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 09/21/2008 03:05:14 Oh yeah, to answer your question: "The Purple Beneath" is what's next for me. But you haven't answered MY question. What's next for YOU?

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