My Present

I wrote this poem and had RE Potter look it over. ...

From Stagnant Water

The rain had finally stopped. After two days of...
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About Myself: I'm not bad, I'm just drawn that way....

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 22, 2008My PresentPoetry 366
Aug 13, 2008The DragonPoetry 827
Aug 5, 2008PassionRomance 1036
Jul 8, 2008The LetterRomance 823
Jun 5, 2008What Am I?Poetry 414
Jun 2, 2008More ImportantPoetry 315
May 30, 2008The Boys in Her LifePoetry 332
May 19, 2008Number 1Poetry 389
May 19, 2008Why Do I CryPoetry 637
May 5, 2008True Love MeansPoetry 482
May 5, 20081500 DaysRomance 520
May 2, 2008The Dance of LoversRomance 528
May 1, 2008When I know that you love mePoetry 307
Apr 7, 2008I want to BelievePoetry 492
Mar 31, 2008You Won't Talk to MePoetry 365
Mar 19, 2008The Perfect GirlfriendRomance 1026
Mar 10, 2008Broken Promises and Shattered DreamsPoetry 443
Feb 27, 2008Cracked PerfectionRomance 721
Feb 21, 2008HerRomance 799
Feb 5, 2008She Loved HimRomance 1072
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Total number of comments: 226

Title article: A Lover's Garden
Date: 2008-09-05 08:36:36

Beautiful love poem. I like how the nature around the narrator is equated with a thought of her lover. Beautifully done. Would be lovely to hear such sweet word from a man one day...but then again, they are men....

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 12
Date: 2008-09-05 08:21:48

OMG...I am hysterical over here...12345? Cmon now. I feel a Spaceballs quote coming on! Then the Ramen Revolution. I was rolling over here and my coworker didn't get it. Hahaha, I loved how we are on the Deparations side of the story now....really looking forward to this ending!!!

Title article: From Stagnant Water
Date: 2008-09-03 15:29:49

Cute, but by far not your best story. See you shoulkd live here. We have bats and they eat all the mosquitos, it makes it nice. But unfortunaltely, we have to live with that humidity all the time.

Title article: Approaching Storm
Date: 2008-09-03 11:45:00

This is so cool. I love the format, I love the words, I love the sense of nature and God. This is fantastic! Thoughts on God all around us and how he shows his power. Most excellent poem, going into my favorites too!!!

Title article: There Is No Me Without You
Date: 2008-09-03 11:43:09

I understand what you are trying to say. It's the same message that I put into a lot of my stories and poetry. The love so deep that you feel you cannot survive without the other in your life. I think this poem was very well done..and I loved that last line!!!

Title article: My Father
Date: 2008-09-03 11:40:51

Beautiful and touching. The bond between a daddy and his daughter is one of the stongest things. I hope my daughter feels the same about her daddy.

Title article: Bonnie
Date: 2008-09-03 11:38:45

Yeah I could go into ass kissing, but this is a public place! I think this was an eloquent poem. It was touching and saddening all in a few words. You conveyed your emotion simply, there is nothing more to say. Don't listen to Alfred, I think it was great

Title article: A Ticket to Tewkesbury
Date: 2008-09-03 11:36:04

OH WOW...you are so awesome. This is fantastic news. I am so porud. Let us know when it does come out for the general public to buy...I will be one of the first...can I get your autograph now? Hahahaha...congrats!!!

Title article: Hearts Cry Out
Date: 2008-09-03 11:33:37

I can see what you are trying to say...but all of the ideas need to be tied together somehow....does that make sense? I found the rhythm of the poem hard to follow, and I think if that were clearer your message will be clearer. But you have good ideas in here...

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 11
Date: 2008-09-03 09:15:42

Hey at least they have pop tarts....hahaha. I like the conjuring of what they know about Canada....that was funny. I am so looking forward to seeing all of this pull together...we're almost there!!!

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

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Birthday? Nobody told me.......errr Happy Birthday mama.

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I know who you are
Great stories, and your poems are great.

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