An unexpected gift, Chapter 1

(Author's note: It's the first chapter to an attempt...

Cassandra's House, Chapter 1

CASSANDRA'S HOUSE Chapter One...
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Website/Blog: www.lorislittlesecret.com
About Myself: I am a married with two kids. I am a nationally recognized Texas certified dance teacher who is a nationally certified Texas registered Pharm Tech who works full time as a bookkeeper in a real estate office and runs a part time sex toy business. How's that for diversity?

Took creative writing online a couple of semesters ago and found that I have more of a knack for story telling than I thought. Please read whatever I put on here and give me some feedback as to what you think! Positive or negative....

Been feeling kind of blah lately so I am not as active on here as I once was. Don't worry, I'll find my mojo again!

If you need help with your spelling and/or grammer, message me and I will help you out! I don't mind at all...I actually like doing that!

Only click on the above link if you are 18 or older. Sorry, it's the law! But if you are over 18, check it out...I made changes!!

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Total number of comments: 419

Title article: The locked door/ intro
Date: 2008-05-23 08:34:19

Okay..you caught me..what's next?

Title article: Help You Sleep at Night
Date: 2008-05-23 07:10:21
Let me clarify
My previous comment. The poem was good. It was my comment about the poem that I found lame. The poem was not lame in any way shape or form. Great job as usual...your writing style is fantastic

Title article: Bleeding Out the Past
Date: 2008-05-21 09:46:29

This was fabulous

Title article: I am my Crucifix
Date: 2008-05-21 09:45:29

You have a lot of insight

Title article: Civil War
Date: 2008-05-21 09:44:27

Interesting story and very well told. I like it. Funny how all Americans can do is complain about our country, yet people are still fighting to get here. Makes you thinks....

Title article: The New Jordans
Date: 2008-05-21 09:42:06

Yeah cause I may be dumb, but I am not sure that I get it....

Title article: Help You Sleep at Night
Date: 2008-05-21 09:40:24

This is lame..but good poem

Title article: Heroes
Date: 2008-05-21 09:39:18

Rhyming in poems is hard, but you did a decent job here

Title article: 50 yrs and still waiting (ch.1)
Date: 2008-05-21 09:35:51

I agree with the above comment...you have a great gift for ideas, but you're not getting them across very clearly. Like I said in the other stories..grammer is an issue. Yes I am somewhat of a grammer nazi, so shoot me. You might want to get some opinions on your writing before publishing it....

Title article: Gabe&Dianne ch.3 & 4
Date: 2008-05-21 09:33:21

More grammer.... 
 
I wanna know who the hell Dianna is?

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 07/20/2008 15:02:15
Naughty me................never signed in.


Here it is!

Phil
Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 05/03/2008 20:11:11
Tag! Now you're it!

R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter)
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crownville		 Created On: 05/01/2008 05:56:45
Something is missing from that pic of yours...oh I know what it is.......the crown...

Christian Wright (FRANTIC)

Hotville
 Created On: 04/23/2008 15:29:40
How you doin.
Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Just fine and yourself?
Jutta Motrin (CELL)
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Edited By Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^) On: 09/09/2008 10:38:26

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Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Thanks...
Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 04/17/2008 05:12:32
Hello!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Hello to you too!!!
Christian Wright (FRANTIC)

Moodyville
 Created On: 04/06/2008 05:40:02
Edited By Christian wright (thirteen) On: 04/06/2008 07:07:06
Me... moody... only when I have'nt got that damned crown.Great stories you have and thanks for your help to mine.thanks
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

right next door
 Created On: 04/03/2008 03:16:53
what do you mean, i never signed your guest book!

see!

just occurred to me that i've been reading your work for some time now and never stopped in to tell you what a great writer you are...

write on!
Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Thank you David....I mean Tarhead!
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