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Member Since	09/03/2008
Last Online	09/23/2008
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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 10, 2008	A Life I Try To Forget	Miscellaneous Stories	188
Sep 6, 2008	Friend Or Enemy	Miscellaneous Stories	278
Sep 3, 2008	Bad Religion	Miscellaneous Stories	247

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Total number of comments: 8

Title article: LIKE A CRAZY BIRD.
Date: 2008-09-06 19:31:15

Crazy Bird
I am not sure how others who read

feel, but I sort of actually feel

bad for Rancid. I love the style

in which you wrote this. Kudos!

Great Job !!

Title article: Rage
Date: 2008-09-06 19:23:27

Rage
This Poem just makes me want to jump in and beat the shit out of this guy, and call her an idiot. I liked it. Great Job

Title article: is this poetry
Date: 2008-09-06 19:17:35

Well...
Thanks for sharing... But seriously you seem quite angry. I agree with Zombie that it seemed wordy. Don't get me wrong though, I liked it. Really emotional.

Title article: The Lighthouse
Date: 2008-09-06 19:10:53

Awesome
This is really neat !! Great Job. When I read it first I was lost but then I read a second time and realized what was going again. that is what you would call talent !!!

Thank You

Title article: Blackness
Date: 2008-09-06 15:41:15

Hello
I agree with HelentheCelt. The a very simple description that weighed a lot. I enjoyed this story because I knew only what was going on at the moment. It was an intelligible, lucid story, but of no lasting value.

Thank You.

Title article: Claustrophobia
Date: 2008-09-06 15:25:22

I was hoping for the best...
Hello

I was hoping that he would lead a good life but in the end I was disappointed. Sort of depressed me. Well written. It latched onto my emotions. At first I was satisfied that his parents died in the way they did. Then I was discouraged by his death.

Good Job !

Title article: For as you judge, you will be judged
Date: 2008-09-03 22:59:28

Opposite
I am usually the guy looking at the people dancing and joking with my buddies about how dumb they look. Reading this made me think. God, I'm dumb. Not because of the fact that I'm sitting there with a bunch of dudes, but because I am laughing at what I don't understand.

Good Story !!!

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