Triple the Trouble, Chapter 1

Triple the Trouble A Cynical Chick Flick...

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About Myself: Irish Boyish and ready with the keyboard.

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Total number of comments: 3

Title article: Zippo
Date: 2008-08-21 21:13:34
excellent
I loved it, the best writng is when its such a pleasure to read that it feels like it's being played out in front of you rather than you struggling to read through typed text. As for not fully understanding a sentence here or there or who's Rufus I'm not hung up on that. 
Personally I enjoyed it, your writing and the whole idea of the dream he keeps having and being scared of waking too late was something new for me to see so well done

Title article: Movie Theater Blues
Date: 2008-08-21 20:58:36

Personally I loved it pretty much all the way through, it's my dark shame of having enjoyed Bridget Jone's Diary 2 (she just wants to find love...) but the ending I didn't really get. 
All the way I felt like I was being brought along with her through her life but the ending felt like I got bumped off along the journey. I understood she'd done everything in life alone so why should she be scared now, just didn't feel that realisation would leave me smiling.

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