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Here's a story that I wrote for my daughter. She...

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Member Since	06/23/2008
Last Online	10/31/2008
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Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jun 23, 2008	Bilko, Cupid and a Pair of Pitman's Clogs., Chapter 1	Humor	324

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Total number of comments: 5

Title article: The Graveyard Greens
Date: 2008-08-04 10:26:27

I really liked this, very original. Just my kind of thing. Keep working on it though, still room for improvement.

Title article: Thirteen Years Of Gray, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-04 09:59:30

Quite enjoyable - but needs a little more spark. Didn't grab me enough to really make me want to get to Chapter 2. Keep working on it.

Title article: Battle Royal - A Survival Strategy
Date: 2008-08-04 09:54:25

I really enjoyed this, it became apparent to me about half-way through that was a game of chess and that made the initial read even more enjoyable. Good work.

Title article: Bilko, Cupid and a Pair of Pitman's Clogs., Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-03 04:52:50

Re - Post Each Chapter
Hi Bubby - thanks for taking the time to read this and thank you for the rating.
I'll take your advice and post each Chapter individually.

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alfred (Alfred) homo on the range	Created On: 10/31/2008 13:53:42 Edited By alfred (alfred) On: 10/31/2008 13:58:01 Dude,,that is a gay pic.

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