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Member Since 05/10/2008
Last Online 09/03/2008
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Website/Blog: myspace.com/lost_my_rhythm
About Myself: Yo, my name's Cody, I'm officially a junior in high school, and I believe that waking up to see Michael Jackson staring in at you thru your window is the scariest thing in the universe; next to waking up and seeing the king from the burger king commercials staring at you thru you window, of course. I write whenever something pops into my head. My genre is horror, but not gross out, more of a spooky/ suspenseful kinda thing. Every now and then though, I may write something that is not for people with easily upset stomachs. And then, sometimes I try my hand at other types of stories, and the results are never good. I develop my skills through writing and hearing criticism. Also, I'm not great at spelling or grammar, so if you see something wrong, go ahead point it out. My idols are: Stephen King and Dean Koontz. Lets see...that's all someone slighted interested enough to read this should need to know. Hope you enjoy my stories!

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 13, 2008SmileHorror 141
Jun 2, 2008RunHorror 193
May 29, 2008Khalahua Chronicles: pt2 : The History of DeathHorror 108
May 27, 2008Lock InHorror 131
May 10, 2008Khalahua Chronicles: pt.1: Welcome to KhalahuaHorror 124

Comments

Total number of comments: 21

Title article: The Root of all Evil
Date: 2008-08-05 20:20:52
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This story represents extremely well why I'm scared of the King. No person in their right mine would trust someone who smiles all the time and can get into your house even after you changed the locks... 
 
Anyways, an overall great story. 
 
5/5

Title article: The People From The Sky II: Fire On The Lake
Date: 2008-08-05 20:10:25
Captivating
Another great installment in the series. I thought it was even better than "Man on the Moon". Since the first sentence, I was captivated by the story and the ending -- oh boy, the ending -- has me begging for more. 
Can't wait for the next installment. 
 
5/5

Title article: Smile
Date: 2008-07-13 17:42:45
Thanks everyone
I'll take care of those typos soon, and then post a re-write sometime in the near future. 
Thanks again!

Title article: The People From The Sky I: Man On The Moon
Date: 2008-07-13 11:40:55
excellent
A phenomenal story. I never would have guessed that the thing they saved would turn on them like it did. Was that whole sick thing an act? I thought your choice to tell it in first person was an excellent one. How the doctor finds his own faults to blame is not something I feel could have been conveyed as well if you had told it in the third person. 
Can't wait for the next part! 
5/5

Title article: Smile
Date: 2008-07-13 11:15:31
One more thing
Thanks for the comment resistanceisfreedom. I appreciate it.

Title article: Smile
Date: 2008-07-13 11:13:18
Thanks
@ Something Indecent  
I understand what you're saying with the cops, and when I do a rewrite, I'll work it into the story. About the description of the man at the beginning: I'm not sure what you mean by this. The description is supposed to be unclear... 
I can understand why you thought I jumped frames to quick, but I actually thought they were paced well enough to show the main characters mental deterioration. 
When I do a re-write I will look at what you said. 
@ Jon Stalk 
Thanks for you comments and actually taking the time to think about whether or not the man is actually there. Who knows, maybe we'll find out one day...

Title article: Growth
Date: 2008-07-13 00:02:07
Excellent
First things first, I thought everything about the story was excellent. Now the formatting, I know it was a mistake, but I have to agree with the people that said they liked it. I actually thought it was intentional when I read it! The story had good pace, and that is probably what I liked most of all. Finally, I thought the way you ended it was amazing. 
Great job, I hope to see more like it. 
5/5

Title article: Vanity(from the minds of Zombie Punk & Tarhead Mugwump)
Date: 2008-07-12 23:57:28
interesting
It is true that it is a good story, but with me it just didn't click. I don't know how well the combined thing worked for you guys. Personally I like your separate work better, but hey, whatever floats your boat. 
I must say I really liked the plot though, and the basis for it is very interesting. 
Now, a slight problem I have with it. It seems to rushed to me. I think it could have been longer and a little more imaginative. 
Good jobe though!  
4/5

Title article: What Kind Of God?
Date: 2008-06-10 20:55:00
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Really good job! 
The story griped me at the beginning, and still hasn't let go. It was powerful in all ways, and in the end, I felt empathy for Adam. 
 
Also, nice use of the biblical names! 
 
Finally, I too am curious about this object in the sky. Will you shed some light, or maybe keep it a mystery; leave it's grip on us. Hmm? I assume it is an meteor, but who knows? 
 
Excellent. 
5/5

Title article: Run
Date: 2008-06-07 08:40:17
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A hypnotic induction? That's the first time I've heard of any thing of mine called that. It makes me feel all warm and tingly... 
 
Really though, thanks for the comments all, and the ratings!!

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