Frantic, Chapter 1

Frantic staggers two steps back. His hand...

Awakening of Minds (part one)

So there I was, looking once more at the device...

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About Myself: I enjoy writing but have trouble making myself sit down and actually type it out. (For some reason I can't write out whole stories on paper. I think it's because I write enough essays in AP US History that I'm basically turned off to the idea of putting pen to paper as a hobby.)

I write a lot of stuff while listening to songs. Atm, I'm utterly in adoration of Harlem Shakes and Foals. <3

I will comment something if I read it, so I'd appreciate if you'd do the same. Or at least rate. Or something. D: I appreciate how many people actually look at the stories, which is rare on other sites, but I'm not appreciating the lack of feedback.

If you PM just to say Hi, that'd be fine too ^^

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DateTitleCategoryHits
May 17, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 19Humor 129
May 15, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 18Humor 115
May 14, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 17Humor 120
May 6, 2008New Year's EveRomance 186
May 5, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 16Humor 107
May 2, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 15Humor 130
Apr 30, 2008That Lonely Syllable.Poetry 120
Apr 30, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 14Humor 122
Apr 30, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 13Humor 125
Apr 27, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 12Humor 140
Apr 24, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 11Humor 114
Apr 22, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 10Humor 120
Apr 21, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 9Humor 121
Apr 18, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 8Humor 124
Apr 17, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 7Humor 106
Apr 16, 2008Far Out ((Part 7))Romance 132
Apr 15, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 6Humor 115
Apr 14, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 5Humor 100
Apr 14, 2008Far Out ((Part 6))Romance 127
Apr 14, 2008Youtopia, Ch. 4Humor 122
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Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 04/14/2008 06:34:22
Agh, that! Umm, I took it off because I wasn't satisfied with it (in general). It was really very bad... It only lasted what it did because so many people left such kind comments^^. The other two (Inside & Insane), I actually like. Heh, thanks anyway!

Adieu^^
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 04/10/2008 09:31:14
Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/25/2008 17:02:50
Ahh...

I love thee.

[And thought I'd make it public: I truly admire your writing talent.]
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Total number of comments: 6

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 14
Date: 2008-05-01 14:10:49
:P
I'm not offended at all, quite the contrary. I've heard it's a really good book, and I was thinking of reading it except I'm too lazy. xP Right now I'm rereading for the trillionth time A Confederacy of Dunces because I think that book is pure genius...I've never read anything so undeniably funny and clever.

Title article: Nutty Abbot
Date: 2008-05-01 12:58:24
3
I love how silly and strangely worded this... 
your creativity is really unrivaled. 
I love the "twas when he was all up in his mother's womb" bit, that for some reason really made me giggle.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 8
Date: 2008-04-19 06:48:54
^^
Thanks. , don't worry, hopefully the next chapter shall be better

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 6
Date: 2008-04-16 17:48:57
xP
thanks for your generously sweet comment...and thanks for not mentioning the trillion grammar errors I had in here. I hope they're all fixed now. 
Gah, I have this annoying, almost dyslexic habit of forgetting words when I'm typing something..like I forgot the word heart after "the sharp little pieces of his shattered,". >.

Title article: Far Out ((Part 6))
Date: 2008-04-15 11:11:08
:O
by filler, I didn't mean I was just BSing, I meant that I had these two scenes that I needed to connect but didn't know how to. That always happens to me, I'll have two seperate scenes I think of, but no way to flow from one to the other. 
thank you once again for the comments ^^ i really, really love & appreciate them :3

Title article: Inside
Date: 2008-04-10 16:13:12
:O
All-dialogue stories always intrigue me... 
anyway, this gave me chills. It feels sort of incomplete to me, but I think that's because I like knowing the whole story instead of having it be left up to me. This reminds me of those bleak stories set in the future where everything's horrible but no one really realizes it because it's been that way for so long. 
I'm def going to read all your stuff now :3 because it's too amazing to ignore.

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