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Website/Blog:	www.justyler.blogspot.com
About Myself:	Looking to write and make people laugh, so that they spit out various liquids on various objects.

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jul 3, 2008	A Purple Dusk, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	82
Jun 27, 2008	A Purple Dusk	Science Fiction	220
Jun 19, 2008	I Need to Talk to You	Humor	355
Jun 5, 2008	A Bad Answer for Writer's Block	Humor	190
May 23, 2008	Orange	Miscellaneous Stories	322
May 14, 2008	Hand Drying Systems and Me.	Non-Fiction	142
May 9, 2008	Future Letdown, Part 2	Non-Fiction	121
May 7, 2008	Where The Heck Are The Lasers?	Non-Fiction	222
Mar 10, 2008	The Monitor	Science Fiction	213
Mar 1, 2008	MVP	Miscellaneous Stories	220
Feb 24, 2008	The Meeting Place	Horror	318
Feb 20, 2008	The Insurance Salesman	Mystery	454
Feb 16, 2008	As We Know It	Miscellaneous Stories	264

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Created On: 05/26/2008 18:53:11

I read your blog.
I hope you realize that the Lakers will eat the flesh of the Spurs.
Ginobli is your only real hope. Duncan isn't being as dominant as he should, and Ginobli (even though I respect the guy), pulled some lucky shots that drove momentum for them in Game 3.

Enjoy the last few games of your season, fan of the Spurs.

From LA,
-CS.

Feedback from JJ Tyler (JJtyler): Your prophecy was correct! Although the Lakers didn't fare to well in the next round.

We'll see what happens in an odd year.

Comments

Total number of comments: 57

Title article: A Purple Dusk
Date: 2008-07-09 08:26:22

Thanks
Thanks for pulling that sentence out. It's funny how you read something 5 times and don't catch something off as that, but when you isolate it, it looks so funky.

I cut it all together.

Title article: Honest Livings.
Date: 2008-07-04 15:21:59

I like the thought of feeling the carpet for the last time. It really becomes a part of you, not only keeping a layer of your skin cells but also for the sentimentality.

“God always watches out for the drunks,” is a good line, although it makes me cringe it was one of the small details that gave the conversation a ‘real’ feel.

Title article: A Purple Dusk, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-03 10:56:30

Thanks
Thanks for the comments and for reading.

The italicized font probably isn't the easiest to read, but I wanted the back story to stand out on the page.

The old one was a good ol boy, like most of my family.

Title article: Last Christmas
Date: 2008-06-30 22:56:46

The End
I thought the end was really well done, and it reminded me of seeing the Challenger go down when I was a tot.

Good job.

Title article: To Her Whom Cancer Took
Date: 2008-06-30 22:35:00

Good poem.
I just lost a brother-in-law to Mesothelioma. He had two young kids.

Here's hoping for a cure in the near future.

Title article: Fight On!
Date: 2008-06-29 22:15:14

I think for what you are writing, and what you are aiming to do, you do it well.

I may not agree, but I think your point comes across nicely.

Title article: Lessons
Date: 2008-06-28 14:39:35

The old man
The old man in the nursing home was portrayed perfectly and I felt emotion for him.

That's magic when you can do that, make someone feel something.

Liked the concept. I agree with what the others were saying with the font. It could still be different just less subtle.

But if that's all people have to complain about, then good job.

Title article: He That Has Ears To Hear Let Him Hear
Date: 2008-06-28 14:22:39

Faith in the face of tragedy is tough to grapple with.

This was short and probably not going to be big who aren't into this sort of thing, but for what it was I think it was nicely done.

Title article: A Purple Dusk
Date: 2008-06-28 14:13:56

Thanks Flossy
You know I somehow used my credits twice to highlight the story name, and now I don't have enough, but once I do get enough I'll promote the next section, or go back and promote this one if possible.

Thanks for the review.

Title article: A Purple Dusk
Date: 2008-06-28 14:01:01

Thanks
This story is not getting much love, but I'm going to keep writing it.

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