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The exotic tales of a pink skunk and a cucumber, Chapter 76

The stormy night made the skunk restless and...

I cant sleep again. Its like this all the...

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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

Hope is dead.
Faith is gone.
Never rely on love.
It only ever turns out wrong.

Now tie this noose around my neck
Let me hang here by the sunset.
All of this I wish to forget.

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jul 8, 2008	Pulled Apart	Poetry	56
Jul 7, 2008	To Get Back To The Start	Poetry	70
Jun 30, 2008	I'll Be Watching The Sunset	Poetry	142
Jun 29, 2008	Cruel and Lonely Game	Poetry	88
Jun 29, 2008	Down Here On The Ground	Poetry	72
Jun 27, 2008	Please Run Far Away	Poetry	81
Jun 26, 2008	Running In Your Veins	Poetry	137
Jun 25, 2008	To Dig Myself Out	Poetry	78
Jun 24, 2008	Not Even A Million Tears	Poetry	89
Jun 21, 2008	With Hands Folded	Poetry	90
Jun 20, 2008	Let Us Pray	Poetry	80
Jun 19, 2008	Divine Intervention	Miscellaneous Stories	83
Jun 16, 2008	A Bloodshot World	Poetry	82
Jun 13, 2008	Never Did Fit	Poetry	50
Jun 13, 2008	Flower In A Vase	Poetry	54
Jun 12, 2008	Life As It Stands	Poetry	58
Jun 9, 2008	One In The Same	Poetry	73
Jun 8, 2008	She's Only A Device	Poetry	89
Jun 6, 2008	White Coats	Poetry	73
Jun 4, 2008	I'm Closer To Nothing	Poetry	96

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Dipankar Dasgupta (d.dasgupta)

August Blackwood (June Eclipsis)

Matt (midnighthowl15)

Jessye (marchintothesea)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

rosa mae alamil (topsyturvywords)

Jody (Jody)

Codi Del Rossi (Codi_Del_Rossi)

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Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.
Anna DeVine (Sad Sara) Somewhere in the sense of time	Created On: 03/08/2008 12:54:58 Hi yer Cody, I juss realized I hadn't signed yer guestbook yet, so that's what's goin' on right now. Nice book, love what yer've done with the place. It's Sorrowful sure, but it rhymes. 'Anna
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it	Created On: 02/11/2008 12:24:20 You have a unique way of telling a poem...I envy you.

Comments

Total number of comments: 703

Title article: the whole
Date: 2008-07-08 22:14:52

i thought this was a great poem! and i had absolutely no problem with the rhythm or rhyming in this. my favorite part is the last part where you say, "My mindset of love is defined"
i thought this was well said because if you go through something like this you base that on love all together.

Title article: Justice For No Man
Date: 2008-07-08 21:58:19

i agree with Lemon. the concept was likeable for me, and the emotion seemed right. but i just feel like it needs to be fixed up.

Title article: Pulled Apart
Date: 2008-07-08 21:43:14

oh and i actually just remembered i also have a more recent poem that i wrote that is definitely on the brighter side of things. that one's called "Life As It Stands" so if you want to check that one out...see if it's good enough to pass your challenge lol.

Title article: Pulled Apart
Date: 2008-07-08 21:38:39

haha yea Potter you actually gave me that same task a while back....and i actually wrote a poem that i thought was on the brighter side but maybe you don't think so....it's called "The Good Soldier" i wrote that one way back so it'll be somewhere in my 7 pages of poetry haha.

Title article: The Darkness of Daylight
Date: 2008-07-07 21:42:51

i really disagree with the stick. this story definitely went somewhere and it proved its point. really disgusting how kids find it appealing to bully a blind individual but i guess they will bully whatever they can. lots of dark emotion as well. thought it was a good read.

Title article: A Final Goodbye
Date: 2008-07-07 21:31:50

this was very heartfelt and showed huge emotion throughout. i thought it rhymed well and never skipped a beat. first poem i have read of yours, Potter. but you did such a great job!!
and you have my sympathy regarding your loss.

Title article: Strength To Say Goodbye
Date: 2008-07-07 21:24:03

i guess i'll be repeating everybody else but i just was lost when i read this and i felt like it was poorly done. although i know if you took a better look at it and picked it apart and built it back up with some deeper emotion it could probably be a nice piece.

Title article: The Soldier
Date: 2008-07-07 21:18:53

i thought this flowed smoothly and it conveyed its message very well.
but to zombie, i understand what you were trying to say in your first comment...and i completely agree, unlike everyone else on this site.

Title article: To Get Back To The Start
Date: 2008-07-07 20:46:59

no it's supposed to be drug, you know like pulling me down below??
or did i use that wrong?
well i'm so surprised by the amount of comments that i have received on this...i just submitted it today, so thank you all for your comments.

Title article: I'm Just Me
Date: 2008-07-04 21:38:11

i felt like it started out all right but then just went absolutely nowhere.

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