Population:200, Chapter 2

Another creature had joined the first at the door now....

Dominate the House

The birth of my nephew is what brought me back to...
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About Myself: writing is simply my escape. i write mostly about what i know. that's not to say that everything i write about has happened to me, it may have just been thoughts or dreams. i don't write a poem a day, or a poem a week...sometimes i won't write for a couple months, it depends on if, when, and where i find inspiration. i don't sugar coat things and ignorance isn't bliss...so if you're looking for those happy go lucky poems i suggest going elsewhere. i appreciate ANY comments, but if you don't like piece i'd like for you to explain why. not saying that i'll change the poem, because i won't, but i'll try to think about it next time i write. well, that was probably boring so i'll end with a quote:
"And when the day arrives I'll become the sky and I'll become the sea and the sea will come to kiss me, for I am going home. Nothing can stop me now.”-trent reznor

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 26, 2008DriftingPoetry 143
Sep 21, 20088 stories upPoetry 124
Aug 19, 2008downward spiralPoetry 144
Jul 30, 2008Thoughts of a SoldierPoetry 264
Jun 18, 2008Dear DadPoetry 219
May 27, 2008my final truthPoetry 190
May 11, 2008Fatal UndertowPoetry 150
May 4, 2008untitled (for now)Poetry 202
Apr 23, 2008Fatally WoundedPoetry 186
Apr 13, 2008The New HolocaustPoetry 223
Apr 13, 2008Life Is No FairytalePoetry 259
Apr 11, 2008caged animalPoetry 191
Apr 10, 2008AddictPoetry 201
Apr 10, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 212
Apr 10, 2008Breaking PointPoetry 199
Mar 18, 2008just friendsPoetry 234
Mar 16, 2008our dying americaPoetry 280
Mar 10, 2008One cut too manyPoetry 305
Mar 3, 2008THE EMPTY CHAIR Poetry 337
Mar 3, 2008Inevitable DeparturePoetry 245
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Total number of comments: 72

Title article: They are the Dead
Date: 2008-09-24 18:19:18

excellent...both in structure and message. people don't think for themselves anymore, and instead go with what's popular...the whole disney channel craze just multiplies it by a hundred. i loved the metaphors as well.

Title article: Panhandling Scum
Date: 2008-09-21 14:18:44

terrible how humanity seems to die out more and more each day. condescending assholes stare down their noses at everyone and anyone who don't live up to their standards. great job portraying this.

Title article: Trained to Kill
Date: 2008-09-21 14:16:54

i'm practically speechless. i can't believe i never read anything of yours before. the imagery was amazing, and the flow was flawless.

Title article: BrEAth
Date: 2008-09-21 12:51:32

very original...i liked the almost, for lack of a better word, choppy thoughts...and it was easy to read through

Title article: Randumb
Date: 2008-09-21 12:48:06

i liked the poem, and the style in which you wrote it...it was pretty good, and i definitely would read more that are written in this structure (or maybe lack of structure)

Title article: Bleeding Sea
Date: 2008-09-21 10:12:13

well, as always, i loved it....i honestly don't think there are enough positive adjectives to describe this....the end really made an impact and tied it together...after i finished reading it i realized that the entire time i had been reading it to a melody...if you ever chose to, i believe you'd have a very good chance at a songwriting career

Title article: after that afternoon
Date: 2008-08-26 19:10:41

i liked this...for me it had a very zen feeling to it, which i tend to like...i did get a tad bit confused though

Title article: Lemon: a Haiku
Date: 2008-08-26 19:08:36

first time i read it, i didn't care for it too much...the second time through, i liked it...funny how that works...for your first haiku it's not bad at all

Title article: Trying to Concentrate on Freedom
Date: 2008-08-26 19:01:43

amazing account of the horrors people faced in world war II...though for some reason it seemed to read more like a short story for me ...then again, that's most likely just me

Title article: Will We Meet Again?
Date: 2008-08-26 18:55:00

what happened to the glimpse of hope that we saw a couple poems back? nonetheless it's really good, the third stanza was my favorite and for some reasong it really stuck out

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 Created On: 08/01/2008 14:41:52
Ah, your quote at the bottom.......from "La Mer" which is one of my all time favorite Nine Inch Nails instrumentals.
Feedback from b.k. (b.k.): lol yeah...their instrumentation was amazing on that song

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