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About Myself: I'm sixteen and I write. A lot. I read a lot, too. I'm a junior in HS and I have AMAZING FRIENDS and they have really helped me a lot. My stories come from my real life, with a little embellishment, of course.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 21, 2008To Bleed, Chapter 10Miscellaneous Stories 86
Jul 25, 2008To Bleed, Chapter 9Miscellaneous Stories 141
Jul 23, 2008To Bleed, Chapter 8Miscellaneous Stories 131
Jul 21, 2008To Bleed, Chapter 7Miscellaneous Stories 134
Jul 20, 2008To Bleed, Chapter 6Miscellaneous Stories 136
Jul 19, 2008To Bleed, Chapter 5Miscellaneous Stories 137
Jul 18, 2008To Bleed, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 150
Jul 17, 2008To Bleed, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 169
Jul 16, 2008To Bleed, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 137
Jul 16, 2008To Bleed, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 174

Comments

Total number of comments: 35

Title article: Lover -- A Haiku
Date: 2008-07-26 10:25:28

It sounds like theres six syllables in the bottom line. I don't know, it might just be me. It's hard to think of so little words to conver a message - so kudos.

Title article: I am alone - the poem, read this before the story
Date: 2008-07-26 10:21:49

It was a little confusing and I did have trouble with the flow, it was unexpected which is good. I just think you could have given more to the ending.

Title article: Insomniac's Nightmare-Ariel's Surrender, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-24 08:37:30

Great job! I liked it and I really really want to see what happens next so keep writing. I agree that it was intense, although there were some grammar issues but I love it anyway!!!

Title article: Flowers on the Wall
Date: 2008-07-22 11:54:06

I like how he saw the flowers as evil, because usually flowers are seen as beautiful and pieces of artwork from nature. I'm not really sure what the flowers are symbolizing, but I like the poem.

Title article: All Liquid Diet
Date: 2008-07-22 11:50:12

I like how it deals with a real issue. Many people don't understand that girls DO feel this way. They are really good at hiding what theyre thinking and I like how you showed her mistrust in people's comments. She took them but she didn't believe them. It was short, but short is good sometimes. Nice work.

Title article: Under The Stars.
Date: 2008-07-20 11:49:00

I liked it. Being a person who is addicted to the stars I can say I love the perspective you told the story from. It flows like a poem, and there is a lot of truth in it. Good work.

Title article: Day of Revelation ©
Date: 2008-07-17 18:32:58

I liked it, and it kept me reading. I liked how it incorporated fate and how it was meant that they be together. It truly was a story book ending and your story is captivating.

Title article: To Her Whom Cancer Took
Date: 2008-07-17 18:27:46

That was really good. Jeez, i would never be able to find words that fit like that! I thought it was really good and explored some deep emotions, and a lot of us cant understand fully (including me) because weve never been in that situation. Good poem, shitty circumstances.

Title article: Is
Date: 2008-07-17 18:23:39

I love it, its so true and really raw. It says something about those things...love, hate, and trust...that you dont hear very often and I like it when people step up and say whats real.

Title article: Love Ends
Date: 2008-07-17 18:19:28

I love how everything is well described. I could picture it in my head, and it kept me reading. Very interesting, and nice work. I really liked it....

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 07/17/2008 07:21:14
Thought I'd better sign in as I'd commented upon your work.

Anonymous words don't tend to be too heplful.

Phil

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