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Ripples Ripples of faded...

I Will Lay In Vain The sun...

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Member Since	01/14/2008
Last Online	09/01/2008
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Website/Blog:	www.Allpoetry.com/Blackxink
About Myself:	I am a fourteen year old writer who is in love with literature in all of its aspects. I enjoy all sorts of things, such as: poetry, short stories, music, movies, and good, stimulating conversations.

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Total number of comments: 3

Title article: Nothing Else Matters
Date: 2008-04-16 11:25:08

Beautiful, a smile for the soul
This is so well written in the sense that i'm now in aww,( if that's correctly spelled). The poetry behind your words, it's absolutely mesmerizing. I find it hard to put adjectives that measure up to its magnificence in place of how i feel. You've done such a great job in writing this, keep up the great work.

Title article: Seven Letter Word
Date: 2008-01-27 13:59:51

great...but...
I think this is a great story. it kept me on the edge of my seat, even though it was only for a minute or so. The way you portray the imagery in this is wonderful; absolutely insiring. my only criticism is: i think you should let us know what happens to your main character, and tell us if the parents, plus the sister, proceed through the baracaded door. those are only suggestions of course, i would never tell you how to write your own stories. keep writing, you're great.

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